If we only knew
the joy in the magnitude
of our kinship to each other's hearts
we would hold each other close forever.
Because our lives have taught us
from our beginnings
to keep each other separate,
we are lost.
Though we've allways known
deep inside
The very purpose of our birth
was to bring each other closer
whatever the cost.
Because the world seeks to show us
that love is pain
the fear of reaching out to another
will allways remain.
As long as we believe
the evil all around us
is powerful enough
to have the right to deceive
Our lonely and hopeful tears
will fall without relent
and in the end
our lives
will be but an empty testament
to any good
weve allowed ourselves to bring
and any
song of joy
our wary souls
have finally learned to sing
will be but another shortcoming
that death drowns out.
Copyright 2006 Pierre Ortega
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Reviews of "An empty testament"
Reviewed by April Ortega (Reader)
Reviewed on August 17, 2006
So, great! If only we can accept the truth will we die alone.
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on July 16, 2006
A strong write with wonderfully powerful meaning. Panda :)
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on July 15, 2006
A truly profound write..food for thought..
Thankyou Pierre.
Vesna
Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2006
Pierre,
If only knowing could set us free from our lonliness, you certainly bring the sad truth to our awareness in your prose. Thoughtfully stated, well written.
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Thankyou Pierre.
Vesna
If only knowing could set us free from our lonliness, you certainly bring the sad truth to our awareness in your prose. Thoughtfully stated, well written.
LL*
Regis
Your pen is one of smooth running wisdom and I like your style. I look forward to reading more of your fine writes.
Susan
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