You were touched and you will feel that feathered light caress for eternity. Such are your words with each drop of ink a tear of unfulfilled love. It is a sinking of the heart at the thought for me too. We will never know but we are better off declining the possibility of more pain and rejection by freeing ourselves of the chains and just.... stepping away. There is love all over this world. We mustn't think we lost when we ceded... to begin another place in time with a more solid foundation.
Love and Peace.
Susan
Reviewed by Linda Luna (Reader)
Reviewed on July 29, 2006
Pierre,
You touched me with the longing - if only - in this poem. Well metered, well written, succinct imagery from the heart...
thank you for this offering.
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~~martin~~
and left alone
to fly south for winter"
You were touched and you will feel that feathered light caress for eternity. Such are your words with each drop of ink a tear of unfulfilled love. It is a sinking of the heart at the thought for me too. We will never know but we are better off declining the possibility of more pain and rejection by freeing ourselves of the chains and just.... stepping away. There is love all over this world. We mustn't think we lost when we ceded... to begin another place in time with a more solid foundation.
Love and Peace.
Susan
You touched me with the longing - if only - in this poem. Well metered, well written, succinct imagery from the heart...
thank you for this offering.
Linda Luna*