I really admire John's review of your poem. I think we make things worse for ourselves sometimes, by accepting the choices we make without regard to our own hearts. I'd like to see you turn this all around Pierre.
Love,
Susan
...many a soul is of color blue...else music of blueness would never have come to be. Though blue music speaks of sadness in the soul...there is a coolness in the color blue...to calm the sadness of which eyes tell.
well done...
John
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Love,
Susan
well done...
John