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Girl In The Laundromat
by Pierre Ortega → (All Poetry by Pierre Ortega)
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A feeble attempt to honor the writings of Richard Brautigan







I watch the girl in the laundromat

as she listens to my life's story

and tells me I'm a good man

as she stares at the ceiling

and blinks at the walls

she says she thinks I've done the best

I can


she looks me in the eyes

and swears she understands

Then she tells me her own story

sadder than mine

and I believe her.


The girl in the laundromat

begs for my phone number

and I give it to her

but I know she'll never call

she's half my age

and besides

she's high.


Copyright 2009 Pierre Ortega 

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 Reviews of "Girl In The Laundromat"
Reviewed by April Ortega (Reader)
Reviewed on July 22, 2009
True?

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on May 19, 2009
Think the "trout fisher" would be pleased, Pierre. I'm impressed!

Kudos, Lin

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on May 17, 2009
look at it from the positive side, at least she's lint free ...

good capture ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on May 16, 2009
Pierre,
Well grounded and highly atmospheric, and the style appealingly direct
and with a definite richness.
John

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on May 15, 2009
So real and honest, Pierre. I find this write most compelling. You have recalled and shared the moment very effectively via your verses. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on May 14, 2009
Wow, what a cool piece...very stark and real. Loved it. Michelle

Reviewed on May 14, 2009
Hi Pierre, That's probably why she was staring at the ceiling, eh? You have captured a moment in this piece that speaks loudly... great write...

In Spirit,
Bear


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