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A feeble attempt to honor the writings of Richard Brautigan
I watch the girl in the laundromat
as she listens to my life's story
and tells me I'm a good man
as she stares at the ceiling
and blinks at the walls
she says she thinks I've done the best
I can
she looks me in the eyes
and swears she understands
Then she tells me her own story
sadder than mine
and I believe her.
The girl in the laundromat
begs for my phone number
and I give it to her
but I know she'll never call
she's half my age
and besides
she's high.
Copyright 2009 Pierre Ortega
Reviews of "Girl In The Laundromat"
Kudos, Lin
good capture ...
Well grounded and highly atmospheric, and the style appealingly direct
and with a definite richness.
John
Regis
In Spirit,
Bear