An Unfinished Woman (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on March 2, 2008

I loved this!! The examination of the real you that others don't see and your search for the beauty that you know yourself to be-the soul searching written here is refreshing-thank you for writing this

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on March 1, 2005

I can truly relate to this one. The blindness of people seeing only of the surface
Lone time and I love what lies below the layers of the mask! IT is totally Awesome Warm Loving and So Unique in all so many ways. Very Much so Yes That you Truly Are.
Thank You Carole
Love Tracey xo

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on January 11, 2005

wise and wonderful

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on January 11, 2005

Carole,

Par excellent picture and write!! Loved the lines: "Years and layers have covered them deep"; "I must peel them back one at a time ... "

Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Much wisdom here, Carole, masterfully expressed.

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Very beautifully done. The unfinished woman is becoming one with finish. R

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

(((carole)))

much thought was placed behind each word, i can see that. thought provoking, many will identify (as i do). thank you for the wisdom in this one

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Methinks you are a bit more complete than your distactors realize. Excellent job here, lady.

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Beautiful and well written.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Most excellent work Carole!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Sandy Knauer

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Very nice, Carole. I remember stepping out on my front porch many years ago and consciously putting on my smile. I vowed that day I'd never do that again, and have tried my best to show the world who I really am since that day. I hope this beautiful piece of work encourages others to do the same.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

This is an incredible write and one I can relate to. When you do find that kind of understanding it will be a treasure beyond your dreams.

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

this is just wonderful, i enjoyed the concept and identified with it so much, and the flow is great too. just a really good poem!

Reviewed by Denise Edwards

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Totally awesome write! I can see myself in many aspects of this. thanks for sharing!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

Carole, this is writing at its finest. And Oh how so many will relate!
Excellent!

Lisa

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 10, 2005

splendid poem, carole; i love how you write! well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D

i am keeping this one; this is too good!