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~Dream World ~ Drifting into that void a dream world that is in-between conscious thought and fragmented remembrances Old memories come flooding in to mingle with the new tangling in a downward spiral Thoughts of your new dreams get pushed aside when you are helpless not on guard the old ones come knocking tantalizing, taunting, teasing you again Those dreams you hold at bay creep in like lost lovers from before invading, interfering blending with your current ones Confusing longing for what was with a hunger for what could be as you struggle to differentiate between fragmented dreams images and reality Knowing that dreams can�t keep you warm at night or answer passions call as your subconscious tries to awake escaping this disconcerting dream world � 2005 Carole Mathys

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on July 28, 2005

On a deep dive through the sea of imagination, "Dream World"
depicts the emotions and the feelings of a
psycho-physiological dream.

I have learned from the reading of "Dream World". It offers an intriguing, enchanting reading.

Long Blissful Creative Life, Poet!

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 24, 2005

Nicely done, Carole. Dreams are wonderful. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 22, 2005

dreams cannot keep us warm but they sure can set our minds on fire ...

excellent poem!

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on May 21, 2005

beautifully expressed, carole. as always, a pleasure.
best,
carolyn

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on May 20, 2005

Truly, Carole, the world of our dreams can be disingenuous and deceiving. A deeply moving write! Thanks so much for sharing.

Peace.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 19, 2005

Outstanding Carole, this is so powerful and true, just loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2005

Very deep true and inspirational. Beautiful Carole.
Thank you! xo(c :)
Tracey

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 17, 2005

Carole,

A mystical place you've penned that many will identify with--powerful imagery!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :) WELL DONE!

Reviewed by Cathrine Hottran

good write, i enjoyed!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Great poetry Here Carole!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Really great poem about the mysterious, and sometimes intrusive, dreamworld. Great photo, too. Dawn

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

i love it, carole; wonderful write and pic! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by E. Richardson

oh yes...have been there and done this...and yes, it is disconserting...painful even. Good job, Carole

Reviewed by William Bonilla

a deep write my dear friend
excellent composing

William ....Peace & Love

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Thoughts of your new dreams
get pushed aside when you are helpless
not on guard

How true, Carole, and this is a most profound write.

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Very creative. I love the theme.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 16, 2005

You really have these dream sequences spot on, Carole!
When it happens like that it is unsettling to say the least...
Excellent write well perceived!

Love,
Eileen