In Dreams (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 9, 2007

Beautiful, very beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed on July 20, 2007

its a wonderful work ....in dreams just says everything in the very precise words it can

Reviewed on February 15, 2007

An easy flowing, smooth verse, telling an entertaining story in a profound and somewhat sensual fashion...well done...wishing you well..
Sam

Reviewed by Richard Orey

Reviewed on February 4, 2007

O, I love this! So soft, so lyrical, your phrasing carrying me through romance and then the emptiness of "...the sounds of being alone." And it's so sad when "...dreams fade and change in tone."

O, yes, I feel this deeply. You move me with your insightful passion. You have such a gift!

With heartfelt admiration,
Richard

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

Reviewed on January 31, 2007

I'm a dreamer and this is a beautiful writing.

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on January 28, 2007

Carole - May I say that you speak for me, also? Would that we had an acceptable way to be sure of that person person we wish to know better. In today's climate, it appears that we must go on wondering how it mgitht work. Your words make it deeply poignant.
Your friend, - Bill

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on January 10, 2007

See the pen is heating up
The ink juices flowing
the hand back in command
as it scribes upon the parchment before you
you been away too long
beautiful write Carole

William
love & peace

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

One of your best pens Carole. Not a letter or thought out of place.

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on January 9, 2007

Dear Carole,

Your rhythm and rhyme serve as a perfect vehicle to convey your message.

Love & Light always and in all ways,
Joseph*

Reviewed by Joyce Hale

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

Stunning, Carole, as usual. (:D This can refer to loves who are gone, or loves who are here but not near; and don't we all have both?! A beautiful, haunting write.

Peace. Joyce

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on January 8, 2007

Dreams can truly be lovely things, as is your poem, Carole.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Beautiful offering, Carole; very well done! BRAVA! :D

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

To sleep, perchance to dream. Excellent expression of longing. R

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

One can feel the yearning expressed within these powerful verses, Carole. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Beautiful delicate gentle offering!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Wistful, wishful and longing. Yet so real and down-to-earth, too. Subjective and objective in equal part - I love the balance which gives dignity and harmony. TY K xx

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Beautiful write...Hugss

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

You invoke compassionate empathy with this introspective write Carole.

Blessings to you ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

This poem is so soft and romantic, Carole, with an ethereal magic about it. Very well written -- I applaud you.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Very dreamy and enchanting!!!!!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Many suffer this lingering fate unfortunately.

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

This is a nice poem, your thoughts express well a dream of desire and the view of emotional love within a very nice display of this thought through poetry...even the loneliness when one awakes is set within the dreamy state of love...nice...

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on January 7, 2007

Carole,

Very sad and longing write. Dreams can be beautiful yet so cruel.