~ Vaporous Frozen Silk ~
Endless snowy white
descending like a diaphanous veil
rendering objects invisible to the eye
Being enveloped as if in a cocoon
driving into and being swallowed
by vaporous frozen silk
Peering into the night
loosing my sense of location
in gossamer shadings of one color
gripping the wheel
panic seeps into my hands
As more white flakes formed
coagulating and crystallizing
encasing the car in white
windows becoming smaller
Retreating from an unfriendly
environment
with illusions of being consumed
by gauzy clouds of down
Disappearing into the whiteness
becoming just one white spec
among millions
in the icy crystal fog
©2/10/2007
Carole Mathys
Bill
"Happy Valentines Day!"...John Rhinem...Bye!
Peace. Joyce
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Light and Wisdom ...
got it down here!!!
enjoyed
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
You have consumed me into this
fantastic narration, snow blinded me
within your white silky caccon
Of Cabin fever.
Love & Peace
William
Sandie May Angel :o)
You made me feel just what I am:
One white spec among millions and always in some kinda fog.
Fun n' games!
Richard
Stay warm and dry, dear Poetess!
Carolyn
Your poem reminds me of the ten years I lived in Northern Wisconsin. There were times, at night during a snow storm, I felt like I was driving at warp speed. The way the flakes zoomed past the headlights. It was amazingly beautiful. I really enjoyed your poem.
Blessings,
Sharon
gem;-) Thank you!
Love,
Eileen
i would be getting indoors or out in the cold..Loved the write,
Michael