Restless Night (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 17, 2007

Sorry, on being so late to endorse each and every, below. Tis has some of the best lines of poetry I've read in years , plus. It leaves me without breeath... or knowing how to handle that. - Bill

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten

Reviewed on April 11, 2007

It's a wonder you didn't roll right off the bed! LOL!
A wonderful dream display in the deepest apportions of a burdened soul...coming to light!
A night like this requires a good night sleep!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Sharon Jordan

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

Dear Carole,

Oh, the restless night pulling at us, making us yearn for the light of day. I can relate.

Blessings,
Sharon

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on March 19, 2007

You have such a soft and gentle style of writing, Carole, and I enjoy it very much. Your words flow over the tongue like a fine wine and the imagery is wonderful. "...then blackness ate from the edges ..." How I wish I had written that! Remarkable, as are all of your images throughout.
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on March 18, 2007

At once powerfully intense and delicately insightful. Greatly enjoyed this moving work that pulls the reader deep inside shadows and flashes of despair and hope.

Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 17, 2007

Engaging verses that connect with my state of mind, Carole. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on March 13, 2007

oh dear...I do believe you and I must share a frequency...this reminded me so much of recent times...well done my friend!

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 11, 2007

A great write of thoughts within
excellent piece Carole

Love & peace
William

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on March 7, 2007

This is a profound write, describing the indescribable!

Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

what a night it seems
could feel the restlessness and the colour that is night
done well

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

"then blackness ate from the edges"

Wow that excellent wording Carole!

Bill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

excellent piece, carole; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 5, 2007

Quite a powerful piece, Carole, and our minds are truly very powerful pieces of our very essence.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

quick, grab a pen and paper before those answers vanish forever!
such a beautifully expressed journey through a night of subconscious overdrive, carole! love it! i'am right there...
peace,
carolyn

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

as shadows thoughts converge on our perceptions, most bring with them a sense of dismay and the contours of deception ... yet, their purpose or secondary construct is to transform our illusions by forcing us to confront their design ...

excellent poem in all aspects, Carole ...

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

The subjects dealt through the lines of "Restless Night" made this composition a philosophic-poetic bouquet scented with esence of wisdom... "Restless Night" did impress me for its rhythm, poemization and contents.

I salute You, Poet.

In gratitude and reverent admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

So very true. Poem describes excellently the relentless of the mind. R

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Beautiful imagery, brings this write alive! Enjoyed this very much, written from the heart, well done!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Vivid dreamscape.

Ron

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Oh I have to agree with Art here...well done Carole!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

I really love and enjoy words written from the heart-mind-body and soul. it captivates and catches the readers attention and I admire you for that. Keep writing and never stop because writing is such a great form of all releases

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

seeking answers
that fit like a faithful
denim shadow

Wonderful image, Carole! Beautfilly haunting and reflective piece. TY K xx

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

This poem displays the continuation of our thoughts durig the cycle of nights into days, and days into nights. You have described the thoughts and the feelings so well. Wonderful poem!!!

Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on March 4, 2007

Nice display of this view into continued thoughts that cannot escape the day or night...through tired eyes and sleepness nights they forge forth from our minds...even dreams cannot hold them back...nice poetry ...

enjoyed.....Art Sun...