Moonlight Spell (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)

Reviewed on June 21, 2007

Very Sexy poetry!!

Reviewed on May 31, 2007

now, patience isn't exactly what i had in mind... ;-)
always a pleasure to read your wonderful work, carole.
peace and blessings,
carolyn

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on May 1, 2007

dear lady, you do have a knack for writing not only beautiiful lines but also sweet sensuality. While soft and utterly romantic, this work is also deliciously hot.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven

Reviewed on April 29, 2007

A very sensual and alluring write. I especially enjoyed the last line. The smooth transition from 'satin sheets' to the metaphor you used 'I will wrap myself in patience' is just wonderful.
Chanti

Reviewed by R Beeman

Reviewed on April 29, 2007

great write filled with vivid and live emotion.

randy

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

Passion within the soft and gentle thoughts of satin...it is patience of which sensuality is created as one waits for it's return....

nice....very nice...

enjoyed.....Art Sun...

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

Beautiful Carole
Soft and sensuously presented

Love * Peace
William

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

Sensuous until the last when practicality takes over. R

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

Playfully sensuos, yet a little coy, like teasing Cupido to make thing a little more heavy, passionate, spontaneous...
Oh! to be that young...
Georg

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 28, 2007

Tenderly said and gently anticipated. Here's to the return of exchange in a glorious moment realized. I admire the word flow, here... gently building to a near exhaustion of patience.
Wow!.. and a bit of Wheeee! - Bill

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

So gracefully stated. Passing time until you are re-united. Just beautiful.

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

a beautifully stimulating an sensuous poem ...

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

Very beautiful,Hugssssssssss

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

Carol such senuous imagery throughout this romantic gem, it just oozes passion and desire.Beautifullly written.So good to see you!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

Oooooooh yeees.... Some of us are masters at deferred gratification and have learned that it's all in the anticipation!! :)) If this is the warmth and temp of the prequel, Carole, the actuality is set to be pulsating! Beautiful poetry and sentiment, thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

MOONLIGHT SPELL comes close to turning remembrance into actuality. Lovely work filled with much warmth and beauty.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

Judging by the temperature in here your patience is wanning!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

You Romantic You..this is well penned!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

I will wrap my self in patience... A wonderful ending to a very delightful romantic poem.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

BEAUTIFUL, Carole; you set the scene and atmosphere in spellbinding lines.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

"Until you return to my arms
I will wrap myself in patience".

Wow, what a great set of lines; the whole poem is good, but those last two lines really set the tone for this beautiful write! Very well done, Carole; brava~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I must need new glasses: I first misread the title as "Moonlight SMELL"! LOLOLOLOLOLOL!

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on April 27, 2007

Carol this is one of the most beautiful and heart touching poems of long distance love I have ever read.