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Rain Moods
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note...this isn't about me, just the rainy weather...
off on a beach vacation next week

~Rain Moods~

 The house hugged its space
heartbeat pulsing
all the while pretending to be empty
Feeling a slight stiffness to the way
she slipped through the air
when crossing the room
A lively patina of emotions
squirmed across her thoughts

 

A clap of thunder rolled

windowpanes vibrating like drumheads

lights like pulsing storm beams

Coruscating curtains of radiant rain

 silvered the night
torrents pounded and pried


seeking entrance

as the storm painted luminous

galaxies on the skylights

as faint images

crawled the hallways floors

 

Loneliness was present as if pure purpose

encased in pure impatience

pierced and filled the void

with an oppressive sense of bleakness

 

Standing by the window

the street was visible

behind that sequined veil of rain

only in a succession of wedges

between half closed blinds

 

She watched her reflection

mingle and run down the window

chasing raindrops

 

© Carole Mathys

October 26, 2007

 


 


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 Reviews of "Rain Moods"
Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on October 28, 2007
You know the rain very well...


a nice picture through thought of poem...
enjoyed...


Art Sun...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
You really set the mood in this poem, Carole. And enjoy your Beach Get-A-Way!

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 27, 2007
"...behind that sequinel veil of rain...only a succession of edges..." a pensive moment looking at the shadows of yersterday and the blinking light of tomorrow.
Beautiful done.
Georg

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
You are waxing eloquent and poetic here carole.
Blessings ...
Richard

Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Excellent write. Beautiful imagery. R

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Carole the imagry is exceptional and so beautiful! I love the way you wrote this one!

Love,
ET

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
An outstanding drire Caorle
loved the imagery
Peace & Love Be with you

William

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Absolutely beautiful--charged with electric emotions, the house comes to life. --Charlie

Reviewed on October 26, 2007
Excellent visuals, Carole; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on October 26, 2007
So emotive and with outstanding imagery and mood.

Reviewed on October 26, 2007
A StormSpinner type of write, beautifully imaged and penned. And won't the beach look even better after the rain you're experiencing! Have fun, stay safe. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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