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When Souls Touch
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*~ When Souls Touch ~* *When souls touch and merge* *as oceans immersing into sand* *grains forming into one* *as water slips through our hands* *Emotional depths are fathomless* *passions swirling in tumultuous space* *loosing ourselves in each other* *as erotic rhythms match the oceans pace* *Waves glide upon the shore* *gently stroking the grains of sand* *as sensual waves roll over us* *caressing our curves with a slow hand* *Deeply goes the sand* *to the oceans very core* *the depth of love we share* *will outlast the sandy shore* *Sand merging with the sea* *our souls, in like combine* *As part of the ocean stays with the sand* *traces of ourselves we leave behind* *Our souls, like oceans and sand* *touch, merge and see* *they�ve known each other before* *and will again* *through the winding paths of eternity* *� Nov 2007* *Carole Mathys*

Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed on December 23, 2007

A sublime depicting of a reverent romantic mingling in eternity of now... Togetherness finds its meaning "When Souls Touch".

In admiration,

Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on December 6, 2007

Heavy Duty, Carole...Good on ya

Walt

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on November 30, 2007

Carole I completely agree with you and this poem is exquisite!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on November 28, 2007

Love the last two strophes especially. This is a very dear write for one such as me who is totally, totally infatuated with the engorging and sensual love of the sea. TY for this elegant beauty. Kate xx

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on November 25, 2007

Two souls becoming intertwined into one is so heavenly. Soul mates for life and the joy of sharing each others love and adoration....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Quite passionate, and the last stanza is marvelous.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

"...gently strocking the grains of sand..." which many a soul, dry and forgotten are in need of tender waves.
Great poem!
Georg

Reviewed by Keith Rowley

Reviewed on November 24, 2007

Excellent - your words induce resonance in my spirit. We are eternal, and love is indelible.

Blessings,
Keith

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Beautiful write Carole
As always enjoyable reading
Love & peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Nice thoughts...the path of two souls, as sand and oceans filling the very core of each other...becoming one into eternity...

very nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Connie Faust

A beautiful poem, a delight to read, it's soothing and deeply romantic. Yes, our souls combine and part of each is left behind to become part of the other.
I think sometimes of how my husband and I (as well as other couples) have affected each other's perceptions. I would not be the person I am now if my life had not been merged with his. Well, I could go on rambling--bottom line, I truly enjoyed this.

Connie

Reviewed by F William Broome

On the surface, soul touching sounds as if it might be dangerous.
But, after flowing and rolling with your gripping words, I see that the entire process should be left to the sea gods and the gentleness of supporting sand. Beautifully done, Dear Poet, and truly memorable. - Bill

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Beautiful write, Carole; very nice! BRAVA!

((((HUGS)))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Stunnig way of using nature's emotional moves!!

Like salt water and sand brushing shoulder,,,,they mix well at the end!!

Love Tinka