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The Veranda
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~ The Veranda ~


 


I picture four women on a veranda


four Southern women in straw colored hats


and gauzy dresses with lace covered fans


They were having a conversation, and it was hot


their hankies were tucked in cleavages


where eternal trickles of perspiration ran


from the female breast bone to exotic vacation spots


that Southern men often dream about


 


These Southern ladies were a mixture


of cotton candy and pink champagne


part calico choir girl


and part satin dance hall doll


 


They were sweet smelling, coy, cunning


voluminous, veracious, delicious


these earth sisters, these rebel mothers


they’re vexing, sexy and pernicious


Women who belonged to another time


where writing a letter was by an exquisite hand


before flirting became extinct


and ladies still blushed behind their fans


 


Like a whim of Starlet’s they turned suddenly


as their conversation waned


shutting the door with the bolt of a latch


Leaving behind the longing to join them, but instead only an


abandoned handkerchief


to be picked up, to savor the perfumed shadows


of these women, these Southern women


 


©2006


Carole Mathys  


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Veranda"
Reviewed by Rosemarie Skaine
Reviewed on July 22, 2008
Well penned; makes us want to follow them. R

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on February 21, 2008
Perfumed shadows...the aroma surely is one that would embed itself within a gents mind...a lovely view of Southern beauty...

nice work, Carole...

enjoyed, Art Sun...

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
That southern men dream about???
I love them too
Great write Carole

William

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Have you Cohiba cigars and Très Vieux Cognac, that veranda of yours will be full of Southern Gentlemen in no time.

Georg

Reviewed on February 20, 2008
Carole I love this poem, made me want to share that veranda with some Southern Sisters! Your imagery and mood are just wonderful

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Carole what splendid imagery, you brought the scene to life for me and I was there wishing I was one of them listening to every word!
You ought to do a series like this.Brava!

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
So delicately penned and filled with such descriptive allusiveness, just beautiful....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
I visualize true Southern belles here. Discrete, yet calculatingly loose. Sexy and assertive. Even patronizing, this quartet. You have painted images and a psychological profile all in your poem. I love it. Jon Michal Willey

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
very charming indeed,, You and Jon Willey are on the same page,,you will have to read his poem.."Tales of the Promenade"
Enjoyed very much.
Christine

Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Lovely - you took me there, on the verandah, made me feel the sticky Southern heat - well done. Glad to see you here, you've been missed!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Ah, my friend it is so good to see you posting today . . . and what a post it is . . . You have captured the southern charm and slightly wickedness of the olde, true, southern ladies . . . I can smell the magnolia's and taste the Mint Julip . . .

Reviewed on February 19, 2008
Marvelous story you tell in these lines, Carole; fantastic!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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