this is in a word, lovely...and the subject is one I work in a great deal...dreams and their seeds, memories...both mysterious and enjoyble aspects of human existance. Outstanding work here my friend.
There are those secret places within dreams that find us grasping those emotions and those escapades so we can find the mystical within a sleeping of love and more ...
Carole, This touches my soul, I have been in that dream. It is good to wake up, however, and live in reality.
Thank you for sharing,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
I can so relate to this gem of a poem Carole! You have expressed it to perfection!The ability to visit our dreams is something I doubt we could live without.Superb write!
Thank God for dreams - whether they allow us to relive special moments written into the very fibre of our being, or to make-good on the imperfect, or to encourage us and give us hope when contemplating what is still ahead. Hang on to them, Carole! The reality is what you receive from them in your heart and soul. Haunting and yet full of a peaceful calm, too. TY Kate xx
The essence of lost love recaptured for a fleeting moment, in a dream. The heart opines, but in a nocturnal moment, is revived. A poignant moment Carole. You wove the emotion beautifully. Jon Michael Willey
I choose to relive once more
the feelings and touch
when love was right
and we were one
I am intimate with these sentiments and I can completely relate to them, Carole. Your verses stir my whole being. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
When dreams allow us to see, to hear, and to feel , that is the closest thing to living. Sometimes , it is better tan life, but we must remember that they are dreams... to be cherished and thought about over the hours. This work is so soft and tender it lives on its own. - Bill
This is just beautiful, Carole.. poignant and bittersweet. A love lost, no matter the reason, we seem to return to and it also returns to us in unexpected moments... again this is beautifully said.. Myrna
This collection of poetry addresses the nature of time, reflections on the natural world, the difficulty of loss,
contemporary social issues and gratitude for life.
Perhaps "..Quiet Storm" will help rekindle old flames buried and long forgotten or express the love so deeply locked inside of your soul longing to be released.
Regardless of where you may be found in love this beautiful masterpiece can be
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nice work, Carole...
enjoyed, Art Sun...
Beautiful memories stay within us eternally
Love & Peace be with you
William
Thank you for sharing,
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Warmest Love Tinka
Be always safe,
Karen
Georg
Well penned.
Cryssa
Love, Christine
the feelings and touch
when love was right
and we were one
I am intimate with these sentiments and I can completely relate to them, Carole. Your verses stir my whole being. Thank you. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
An inspiring beautiful composition... "Memory's Echo" sings the magic of dreams and depicts a rainbow of love.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D