Sounds like a regular hot-line to me, Carole... Maybe I should take calls more often! Wires that we desire to be crossed and uncrossed simultaneously. Lovely metaphor and clear as a bell... dayumm... thought that was my phone ringin...!! :)) xx
Sensual escapades can be captured even within the voices that encounter themselves once they cross paths...especially when mixed with exotic thoughts of satin...and magic...
That kind of voice make me to start heavy breathing...
...and my imagination to run away, my hands to sweat and my feet wanting to run as faster as they could to close the distance between the phones.
Steamy, hot, seductine prelude to?? I see melting phones and arcing signals. Great piece of work Carole. Jon Michael Willey
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2008
Woweee . . . Carole!! . . . Nice bit of conversational eves-dropping here . . . Too bad you didn't stay long enough for the . . . er . . . main event, but we get the picture, yep, we can figure it out . . . LOL
...passionate pen...takes peak minutes...in lines held between two voices...and a soft connection...of brilliant images.
excellent poetry Carole...
John
This one burns up the lines, with its passion - well done! Love the imagery " ... the one that is steeped in husky amber" and "honeyed breathy caress" are my favorites - sublime!
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nice...
velvet seduction
Marvelously penned, Carole.
...and my imagination to run away, my hands to sweat and my feet wanting to run as faster as they could to close the distance between the phones.
Georg
heavenly to read
Peace & love be with you
William
Regis
Be always safe,
Karen
I like this composition... "Voices" is a flower with scented petals of libidinal and romamce spiritual essences to please Venus and Cupid.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Gimme that number....lol!!
Love Tinka
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
excellent poetry Carole...
John
Kudo's! I totally dig the imagery,i feel like i'm caressed by it!;-)
Love,
Eileen
This one burns up the lines, with its passion - well done! Love the imagery " ... the one that is steeped in husky amber" and "honeyed breathy caress" are my favorites - sublime!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)