~ This Night ~
Light and music sparkled
hovering just above the waves
as they rushed to shore
on foamy fingers
The sun slides slowly
quietly as a sigh
adding a softness
to the music of this night
The sounds were so clear
wrapping me in old memories
as if a comfortable friend
while the night glides across the sky
like chocolate covering a bowl
Drifting Closer
like a crescendo passage
swelling with haunting music
enchanting and mystical
as I stand mesmerized
lost in the beauty
of memories
and the music of this night
September 2008
Carole Mathys
Good poetry. Poor Baby. I heard no mention of a man in all of that, so it must have been memories only. You had me floating there for those wonderful minutes. Sharp pen, here. - Bill
Myrna
ET
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Well composed
Love & peace be with you
William
Be always safe,
Karen
Regis
Enjoyed,
hugs
Fee
Very well written.
Stephen Pollard
Warmly,
Sage
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D