softly and gently the time ebbs away from us, almost unnoticed until we are suddenly aged -- this is so very true to life and a lovely poem -- peace and love to you my friend -- JMW
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on December 6, 2008
It has been much too long since I have been here . . . This is nostalgia 101 . . . You are the teacher . . .
A stoop?? A stoop? Haven't heard that word since I left New York! Changes happen faster than we can keep up with, but what is in your mind and heart never fades away, beautiful writing...
the smells of ethnic food
and fresh baked bread
mingling with the laugher
of kids in the street
I love nostalgic writes, Carole, and this is a good one. You even took me back to my own youth in a big city neighborhood. And when I go back there these days to visit, everything looks so sad now.
Memories are almost always the most altruistic snapshots of the past - in that sense we feel a loss for what was - but oftentimes I believe only due to the fact we have traveled the path already.
You do take the reader to your snapshot and help them enjoy the moment to share in your feeling of loss for those times.
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
Edwin
You have always written with the smoothness of silk - you are a poetess c'est magnifique!
Best wishes,
Lance
Be always safe,
Karen
Fantastic imagery looking back,then the
future so haunting and sad...
Love,
ET
nice...
Art Sun...
Nice...
Fee
Christine
I have enjoyed the reading of "Changes".
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendvai ben-YEHU
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Thank you for the trip back to our past
and your excellent imagery
LOve & peace be with you
William
and fresh baked bread
mingling with the laugher
of kids in the street
I love nostalgic writes, Carole, and this is a good one. You even took me back to my own youth in a big city neighborhood. And when I go back there these days to visit, everything looks so sad now.
Memories are almost always the most altruistic snapshots of the past - in that sense we feel a loss for what was - but oftentimes I believe only due to the fact we have traveled the path already.
You do take the reader to your snapshot and help them enjoy the moment to share in your feeling of loss for those times.
Thanks, ~D.