Random Thoughts - (freestyle Haiku) (poem) by Carole Mathys on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 1, 2009

Loved them all! Beautiful random thoughts...lovely expressions of them.

Anna

Reviewed on August 14, 2009

Carole, I truly believe that you are tops in the haiku genre! You never write anything less than the best!Kudo's!

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

I love haiku and I certainly love and appreciate these, Carole. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Art Hernandez

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

nice thoughts Carole...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 8, 2009

oh, elusive light of life... dreamers, shadows, breath of darkness...
what an exquisite write, dear carole.
be well,
carolyn

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

A story for each Ku... well done!

Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

I am really enjoying your beautiful poetry. This poem conjured up such images and feelings.

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

Beautiful haiku's,I enjoy reading them,take care

EDWIN

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on August 5, 2009

"...breathing darkness..." two words that encompass an immense array of feelings.
Great job!

Georg

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Great poetry withh such wonderful depth...
hugs
fee

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Carole,
Not so random to this impressed reader, the linkage is in tone, style and ether; all of them first-rate but (almost inevitably) I have a favourite

in the open window
whispering against the sill
lace curtains

that is beautiful and so evocative. Kudos!

John

Reviewed by Jon Willey

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

these free form Haikus are in depth works of art -- my favorite, though I have another that just narrowly missed, is, "endless waves of dreamers - from rigid old world ways - themselves fleeing west" --an applicable analysis over 150 years ago, and still applicable today -- peace and love my dear friend -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Love your randowm thoughts, Carole, especially...

in the open window
whispering against the sill
lace curtains

-gene.

Reviewed by Johanna Fields (Reader)

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Carole,Your haiku's are beautiful. My friend hugs Johanna

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

love these Carole..the last one is my favorite:)

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

These are wonderful haiku's.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

Wonderful write, Carole; fantastic! BRAVA, extremely well penned!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

A fabulous haiku-chain, Carole, with a sublime common thread... I get the sense of evening and sunset, soft winds, elongating shadows and quiet meditation. Especially the first ku is sheer brillliance. Top notch work, TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on August 4, 2009

NICE WORK. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS YOU.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS