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Shades of Twilight
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Shades of Twilight

 

 

On the beach all was quiet

colors were beginning to caress

the darkness with pastel shades

Shadows that came with

the first tentacles of twilight

began braiding across the sand

scurrying ahead

of waves gentle hands

A soft billowing breeze

smoothing my skirt

  admitting a gust to tussle the fire

capturing my thoughts

within the hypnotic flames

Tossing them aside

as sand absorbed spent dreams

of unfulfilled promises

washed clean with the tide

Trying to shake off the nostalgia

spilling into every flickering shadow

a wisp of his scent

arranged itself around me

bringing a burst of clarity

Nudging emotions aside

inhaling the peaceful night

as the sounds of contentment

lapped against the silent shore

 

 

© Carole Mathys

November 15, 2009

 


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 Reviews of "Shades of Twilight"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on December 26, 2009
FANTASTIC PHRASES AND IIMAGERY...DONE SO WELL AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. HAPPY NEW YEARS TO YOU AND YOURS...SAFE IN HIS ARMS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 14, 2009
***** s c r u m p t i o u s ***** :)

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on December 8, 2009
a beautiful write Carole
I loved the great imagery
Love & Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on November 20, 2009
a mesmerizing capture, carole

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 20, 2009
An utter beauty sis!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on November 19, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on November 18, 2009
Magnificent poem.Beautifully penned.I enjoy reading it,take care

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
beautiful photo complimenting a graceful and inspired poem ...

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Exquisite....takes my breath away

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
This takes me to those warm, caressive moments where the mood and livin is easy out of doors and the day just slips away in the company of those you love. It's that time when the cerebral gives way to the sensual and often coincides with the time when talking gives way to the tactile... Yummy! :)) You take me there and back again in your softly lilting verse. xx

Reviewed by Stephen Pollard
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Carole :

Beautifully written.

Reminded me of an opening page to a lovely
written romance novel.

Best Wishes,

Stephen



Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Nearly missed this one, Carole - so beautifully illustrated in image and verse - GORGEOUS!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on November 16, 2009
Twilight...shadows coming, whispers and a thought tiptoeing around trying not to disturb a peaceful moment coming inside the eyes.

Georg


Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Beautifully written with such genuine emotions..

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Twilight is such a beautiful time for reflection, it's as if the world stands still for that moment when you absorb the energy that you truly need to bring you toward clarity. Lovely poetry, Carole, and the photo is magnificent!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
very lovely write that flows with grace and beauty
fee

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Nice work Carole...The variety of emotions within your thoughts take us into the core of your work...an enjoyable read soft as the twilight...

nice...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Captivating write, Carole. "colors were beginning to caress the darkness with pastel shades shadows that came with the first tentacles of twilight"....delightful turn of phrasing. Loved it!

Anna


Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Carole,
"...the first tentacles of twilight" (love that!) spread beautifully in this rich evocation of another beginning, renewal and memory.
Fine, fine writing.

John

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
the spent words drizzle honey onto my imagination's pallet -- gently the breeze ushers in the sky's pink flares of clouds drifting by -- serenity invades the deepest reaches of my soul -- and I wish only to dwell in this place in this moment, for eternity -- Carole, your weave of mood and setting upon the awaiting blush of imagination is superb my dear friend -- peace and love -- Jon Michael

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
So rich with the beauty of twilight wrapped around your nostalgic thoughts,that slip away into the ocean leaving you on the shore in gentle peace. Superb, Carole!

Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Beautiful write, Carole; love the piccy! Fabulous!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Take the photo, read the poem, life seem so good. Taking emotion and delving into the shadows of evening laps at the receding day. Very nice. I was there.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Your description of this idyllic place is wonderful, Carole; and the graphic image that you have choses very effectively complements your verses. Love and best wishes,



Regis

Reviewed by Mark Lichterman
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
Very, very beautiful, Carole. Thought of, no doubt, while at your idalic vacation beach house on the shores of the lapping Atalantic ocean in sunny Flordia. This makes me want to sit in the sand with my arm around one I love watching the lowering sun.
Your friend; Mark

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on November 15, 2009
What a beautiful photo, Carole. And love the tranquil
picture you paint with your Shades of Twilight. -gene.


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