Shades of Twilight
On the beach all was quiet
colors were beginning to caress
the darkness with pastel shades
Shadows that came with
the first tentacles of twilight
began braiding across the sand
scurrying ahead
of waves gentle hands
A soft billowing breeze
smoothing my skirt
admitting a gust to tussle the fire
capturing my thoughts
within the hypnotic flames
Tossing them aside
as sand absorbed spent dreams
of unfulfilled promises
washed clean with the tide
Trying to shake off the nostalgia
spilling into every flickering shadow
a wisp of his scent
arranged itself around me
bringing a burst of clarity
Nudging emotions aside
inhaling the peaceful night
as the sounds of contentment
lapped against the silent shore
© Carole Mathys
November 15, 2009
I loved the great imagery
Love & Peace be with you
William
Love Tinka
Beautifully written.
Reminded me of an opening page to a lovely
written romance novel.
Best Wishes,
Stephen
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
fee
nice...
Art Sun...
Anna
"...the first tentacles of twilight" (love that!) spread beautifully in this rich evocation of another beginning, renewal and memory.
Fine, fine writing.
John
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Regis
Your friend; Mark
picture you paint with your Shades of Twilight. -gene.