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The Impetus of Erasure
by Brian K Pellerino → (All Poetry by Brian K Pellerino)
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The vital instant of entropy
the tragic resolve to atrophy
where the fluid from your eyes flows caustic
and the emptiness borders on the mystic

The decision is birthed in motion
it gathers steam in plaintive devotion
forging ahead in cannibal regard
settling stations with silent petard

Violently stoic and placidly vile
charismatic rationale devoid of style
Painful removal of all that is spare
under the facade lies breathable air

Certainly poised to deliver the loss
redoubling efforts to proffer the cost
a lesson once known - lost nevermore
to bring what was swallowed to the fore


Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2005

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 Reviews of "The Impetus of Erasure"
Reviewed on August 11, 2005
B,

Unique, creative use of imagery and poetry! Well done! :)

I love the way you write. :) Thought provoking and wise.

(((HUGS))) and love, K. :)

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 10, 2005
bravo, Brian! awesome use of imagery and language ... the rhyme and meter are also finely tuned ...

Reviewed on August 10, 2005
Oh, this is pure genius! The impetus certainly erases much that ultimately may seem inertia... but then is all the breathable air under the facade, now static.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 10, 2005
Splendid use of the English language. Well done.


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