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Disassembly
by Brian K Pellerino → (All Poetry by Brian K Pellerino)
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Break it on down
Down ‘n down
Showin’ me th’ ground
Sound for sound

The screaming stops
And the mind draws taut
The splinters of the first fray
And the fever is caught

Break it on down
Down ‘n down
Showin’ me th’ sound
Bound and bound

The soft buzz
Of the inevitable losing
Drowning out
The strength of choosing

Break it on down
Down ‘n down
Showin’ me the bound
Unwound unwound

Erosion now
Like a river’s roar
All washed away
From a savior’s shore

Break it on down
Down ‘n down
Showin’ me around
Round and round


Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2006

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 Reviews of "Disassembly"
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
B.,

There is a fluidity of movement in this thought provoking, excellent write; enjoyed! Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, K.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Excellent...I could feel the hush & buzz in this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 20, 2006
the moments of our lives are broken down into a continuum of movement ...

"The soft buzz
Of the inevitable losing
Drowning out
The strength of choosing" < < < excellent verse!


Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 20, 2006
Great rhythm...enjoyed.


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