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Entropy
by Brian K Pellerino → (All Poetry by Brian K Pellerino)
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The traces are swirling
down
vortex
context
what's next?

The faces are burning
drown
aflame
enflame
end game

The spaces are turning
brown
erased
effaced
disgraced

The graces are yearning
frown
postwar
abhor
no more


Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2006

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 Reviews of "Entropy"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
A swirling write!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 26, 2006
I found the swirling burning turning yearning,
along with the other intersting rhyme theme very
unique as it enhanced the premise of your poem.
Superbly done, Brian!

eT

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 26, 2006
i really like how this poem intensifies as it moves along to the finale ... i find a lot of verve in these verses ... unlike the title, this poem is quite efficient in its observations ...


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