I found the swirling burning turning yearning,
along with the other intersting rhyme theme very
unique as it enhanced the premise of your poem.
Superbly done, Brian!
i really like how this poem intensifies as it moves along to the finale ... i find a lot of verve in these verses ... unlike the title, this poem is quite efficient in its observations ...
First Edition Translation of Teselas by Carmen Crespo X111 César Simón Poetry Prixe 2016 Translated from Spanish by Robin Ouzman Hislop and Amparo Arrospíde
Love Tinka
along with the other intersting rhyme theme very
unique as it enhanced the premise of your poem.
Superbly done, Brian!
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