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Black Out
by Brian K Pellerino → (All Poetry by Brian K Pellerino)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
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Escape from the black
where the light is in lack
I run for the crack
and I'm taken aback

It's on the attack
an attempted bushwack
in hated playback
as my worries unpack

I attempt a wisecrack
as it is my knack
await the feedback
ending again in my wrack


Copyright: Brian Pellerino 2006

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 Reviews of "Black Out"
Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 10, 2006
Enjoyed this language play you do so well, Brian. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on September 7, 2006
Wrack is as wrack does, Brian. Or, there are few words of light in this piece, when reading the first words of the each line. Attempt, I guess, is the only one I see its brilliance.

A deep level piece with unseeable egress.

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen


Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 7, 2006
I am wacked out for a six reading this!!

Love Tinka :)

Reviewed by char lee (Reader)
Reviewed on September 6, 2006
Wack!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 5, 2006
Don't be slack get off the wrong track;-)
Aleays a treat in your den Brian!...

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on September 5, 2006
a lot of rhyme there, brian, i think i like it

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 5, 2006
Brian,
The rhymes are outstanding and this one I really enjoyed.
"It's on the attack
an attempted bushwack
in hated playback
as my worries unpack "
Josie")


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