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If it Ain't Broke...You ain't Paying Attention
by Brian K Pellerino → (All Poetry by Brian K Pellerino)
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The danger inherent

the neglect apparent

mastered disregard

old wounds scarred

information errant

 

Easily mislead

spiritually dead

eyes upon the prize

swallowing the lies

idealism mostly dead

 

Misrepresentation

false liberation

measured disrespect

politically correct

drowning in libation

 

Autumnal decision

forgo derision

future now in focus

hope or plague of locust?

last chance for revision

 

Copyright:  Brian Pellerino  2008

 
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Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on September 17, 2008
Many fine points brought out in this piece and yes, I too wonder what is yet to come...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Reviewed on September 16, 2008
B,

Random thoughts connect to make a powerful statement: and it rhymes, yet! Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love,

K.
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