Agony etched faces Cutting tissue live Multi colored eyes Baby tears aged Wrinkles Wet. Front-porch Bodies floating ByThousands in sunshine Dehydrating day six Thousands walk away Born again first steps Heart beats forlorn Some remain refugees Stillborn
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Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)
Reviewed on October 12, 2005
Sad poem and time in life. Very traumatizing time to deal with and never forgotten.
Excellently written
Tracey 42xoox(c :)
Reviewed by Biri Amante (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
I know this kind of wrenching, unforgettable pain.
well written, James.
Ah James, so deeply touching, this brought tears to my eyes, outstanding and deeply poignant poem,
Reindeer
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 3, 2005
James you have really written this well.
sadness in this is sobering to saythe very least.
I Pray you find peace and there are just so many things we
can't understand yet. A baby was lost in my family also and
we all feel the pain so I can relate to what you're saying.
need to talk...contact me.
peace and spiritual refreshened light of confort to you and yours',,
Rich Criso Suarez
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Excellently written
Tracey 42xoox(c :)
well written, James.
Reindeer
sadness in this is sobering to saythe very least.
I Pray you find peace and there are just so many things we
can't understand yet. A baby was lost in my family also and
we all feel the pain so I can relate to what you're saying.
need to talk...contact me.
peace and spiritual refreshened light of confort to you and yours',,
Rich Criso Suarez