Coming of Age (poem) by Paul Williams on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Candy T (Reader)

Reviewed on May 5, 2007

couldn't have said it better myself, sir.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 16, 2006

Powerful message!

Reviewed on September 1, 2006

"Coming of Age"

"Lies, upon lies, upon lie
like gathering clouds
in ever darkening skies"
Quite an interesting write!
I also agree with the motto on your bio.

Sincerely,
G. Thomas

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 31, 2006

BRILLIANT wrtie, Paul!!!!! Well-done!!!!!

Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on August 31, 2006

Whata a battle cry! Very well written, Paul, as usual. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on August 31, 2006

R i g h t ON !! < < 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on August 28, 2006

�Screw you� said I, �your game is up,

for we are infinities of possibilities,

free thinkers, who give our love freely,

we are all and we are one

and will not succumb�.

YUP!

Vesna:)

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on August 27, 2006

Paul,

Powerful! You jump off the page with a wake-up call in this write!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on August 25, 2006

I particularly admire the power of the last stanza, Paul. Very well stated, my friend. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on August 24, 2006

The GPS Sparky radar could see it a comin'! Coming of Age wades into Truth up to its fattened flanks! How many pigs were put into the tomb to feed the emperor? Precise word organization, Paul...

Sage

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 23, 2006

Oh, BRAVO Paul! A breath of fresh mountain air! Really clears away the fetid stench from the accumulated mounds of rotting human waste befouling our breathing (and hence, thinking) space.
Thank you for having the courage to post this resonate, timely piece, POET!
Peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 23, 2006

Masterfully done Chuckie....and yes like Kate said....I can hear you and see you recite this!!

Powerful my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on August 23, 2006

I always new I was tuned out.
Powerful, and a subtle intelligent rant type thingy...

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

No loss of innocence quite so brutal as unforgiving disillusionment and no claim to selfhood quite so powerful as raging against the same. A beautifully brilliant and brilliantly beautiful work. Much gratitude for the sharing:-)
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

An excellent in-your-face refusal to bow to the powers that be, Paul!

'we are infinities of possibilities...' love it!

Rhonda

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Deep views on the intricacies of modern cyber space and laws that govern, I like this, we shall overcome.

Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

A man after my own heart Paul - well at times, when I am not gushing romantic drivel and convoluted mind puzzles.

A wise and insightful sage of a write with the overtones of a frustrated prophet.

"What foppery is this?" INDEED! Good job!

In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

Bravo! I love this fantssy in reality poem Paul! each line is powerful! "Truth is broadcasting on another frequency" This line is exactly what's happening today! Exceptional!

Eileen

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 22, 2006

WOW!! I can both see and hear you recite this, Paul, (my privilege!!) and it is POWERFUL. For all your jovial flipness, you do "serious" and "deep" very well. This is a mind of a truly great thinker at work and your sonorous tones here spell out the message... "L-I-S-T-E-N.... I MEAN WHAT I SAY"... I like a good eye-ballin from time to time... this one stopped me in me tracks... On the other hand... you up for a party??????? :)) Too damn right you are... Poole Harbour or bust... BTW "What foppery is this?" Truth is broadcasting on another frequency.... BRILLIANT!! I like! LOL K xx