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· 2nd Edition Encyclopedia of the Harlem Renaissance (eBook)


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· Reflections on Ode to the Good Black Boots that Served My Soul So Well

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A Blue Rose for the Sergeant

by Aberjhani — Read all 107 poems by Aberjhani

In memory of George F. Patton (Jan 14, 1936-Aug 10, 2005) retired U.S. Air Force sergeant, beloved mate to Vanda Lee Patton, adored paterfamilias, treasured friend, and illuminated spiritual being.

Saturday, August 13, 2005


Poem Artwork



The seed that grew this rose

formed long ago. 

It was something like a pearl

that fell from God’s loving eyes

and planted itself deep inside

the mysteries of this chaotic world.

 

The roots made their own space

and spread out through love shared

between people common to our lives:

your son Moses and my sister Vera.

 

Blessed by angelic silence

and nurtured by ancient wisdom

the seedling stem of this sky blue rose

broke through dirt and concrete

like a revelation foretold

breaking through the ignorance

of those too blind to see

and those too afraid to hear.

 

Then came the pain of thorns

produced from bitter experience.

And the unfoldment of elegant green leaves

developed out of secret knowledge

and the clear spiritual vision

of a humble dreaming prophet.

 

That we are able to honor

and share with one another

the bright pieces of heaven inside us

is what makes the rose

of this sacred kinship blossom all year round.

It is what anoints our lives in a holy way

with this rose oil perfume

of sweet grace, good faith, and enduring love.

 

Aberjhani

© 13 August, 2005

 
 
 
 

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Reviewed on April 7, 2007
I simply loved this poetic offering finding it a breathtaking mental simuli!

Continued blessings to you Aberjhani,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on February 3, 2007
Thank you for this powerful tribute.

Peace,
Joselyn

Reviewed by Lonely Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on October 6, 2006
Thanks, thanks thanks for finding my works here and commenting. Now I wanted to write about something using 'rose' as a metaphor and look at what I found 'rose' used here in a wonderful way. The context I am going to use 'rose' is a different one. Still it is a conincidence I love a lot.
Lovely poem and like the previous commentator said.... love the language and of course the way you depicted the idea.

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on August 26, 2005
love the language expression here, how simply you put these eternal truths. the metaphor of the rose for a friendship grown and tested through life's bounteous beauty, trials and tribulations. definitely a sublime tribute to somebody in your life whom, i'm sure, deserves every word of it. Blessings, Poet. ~1

Reviewed by M. B. (Reader)
Reviewed on August 24, 2005
What love resides between the lines of this shining tribute to a great friend.

~ Mari

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on August 21, 2005
Outstanding tribute, Aberjhani! You have such an amazing gift with words - yous words grasp the readers heart and soul.

God bless, Aberjhani!

Sandie.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
Who else could gift a Blue Rose to a Sergeant of the US Air Forces?

I can only stutteringly repeat the well-chosen words of those who have commented... whatever you write, whether the substance of poetry or the encouragement of review, it is as if the gift of speech has been created for the very first time to awaken our senses to the wonder of communication that is all at once involving of the whole of the material, physical and supernatural worlds. Words are given fresh meaning with your voice and vision and reach us on every conceivable plane to create a holistic experience.

This tribute not only honours this great man's passing, but is the oil which perfumes and eases his passage for those who remain. What a gift!

Bless you and thank you. Kate xx

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 20, 2005
An awesome poetic tribute, Aberjhani. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace to you.

Regis

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2005

Aberjhani',
You're an Ardent Fire creating Holy Goodness's wisdom and
placing us all closer to God!
You have a Holy talent and a gift of constance that's unwavering
and your expressions are AmonG THE BEST INSPIRED BY THE HIGHEST!
Be blessed with real joyfilled life and healthy creative long life
in unity with those you love!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci
Reviewed on August 18, 2005
Aberjhani,

You have the rare gift of allowing your readers to feel, if only for the moment they are wrapped within your words, the admiration and compassion you emanate for your subject, be it physical, spiritual or emotional! Really gorgeous tribute!

Reviewed on August 14, 2005

Blessed are those that are stimulated to create, when the natural
feelings seem to show losses...

"A Blue Rose for the Sergeant" is reverently delivered from the garden of the One that knows the importance of the aroma of friendship.


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on August 14, 2005
How do you do it? I've never read any of your work and been left with anything but a deep sense of awe - the same sense I get when I observe the rising of the dawn. You are a true poet Aberjhani. I've missed your work in my absence but will be doing catch up soon.
Take care
Chanti

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott
Reviewed on August 14, 2005
Outstanding tribute, Aberjhani! Your poetry is like fine wine it just keeps getting better with time!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 14, 2005
outstanding poetic accomplishment ... a tribute that moves both heart and soul ...

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on August 14, 2005
A beautifully stunning tribute Aberjhani, you have my heart felt sympathy and condolences.

Paul

Reviewed on August 14, 2005
A Blue Rose has always been for me a symbol of impossibles possible. A rare, for many utopian, flower, with a gently divine quality that makes sky-hued petals suddenly bloom, in full glory, even from rocks... or "dirt and concrete". A reverent, exquisitely felt and expressed tribute to a genuine Blue Rose, dear Poet. Thank you.
Many blessings of Love&Light*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Wonderful unique tribute, Aberjhani! My prayers are with you, his friends and family.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
This is the finest tribute to a friend, passed that I have ever read. What a beautiful spirit you have painted for us that we all should know him if only in his passing. I am sorry for your loss, but happy for the time you were blessed with his presence in your life.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Hope you find peace in the passing of one you held dear..

Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Aberjhani,

A most heartfelt tribute to a great man. I'm sorry for your loss--your pain is clearly evident in these powerful, poignant words, beautifully illustrated in verse and imagery. Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
A beautiful tribute my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Condolences to the family and friends. A beautifully crafted poetic tribute, in your uniquely fashioned words. May all be blessed...

Eileen

Reviewed by Trainee Poet (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Very strong poem, you have poured your emotions in this so well...My prayers and condolences for the departed soul and the bereaved family.

TP

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Limbered up the pangs of my heart with this one. (If that doesn't sound coherent, I can't help it, it's how I feel.) Once again, my friend (rhyme, whadda ya know) you have put grace to paper, rather screen. You have the wonderful technique of putting down whord that makes for good poetry, but you say it in such a way as to befuddle the rest of us damned amateurs out here becsuse we can't reach quite that far up the literary stratosphere.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
A wonderfully composed tribute to a friend who has been taken away but will live in your heart forever. I feel for your sorrow.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 13, 2005
Beautiful and tender, Aberjhani. My condolences to you and the family. ~~Nordette

Reviewed on August 13, 2005
excellent write, aberjhani; splendid job! Bravo!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D


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