I love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!and i drink of creation quite often, although the return to my throne has been a long journey, fighting and clawing my way in the dark at times....


:)
Gypsie

Grand and impressive. There is a mystical world in this poem that corresponds to my own. A work that breathes words of perfection.

Just like that: transported by your words once again.

A truly stunning piece of romantic, rhythmic vision, simply superb.

Paul;-)

excellent title and beautiful poem ...

Aberjhani,

Whoa! This is freak'n stunning! LOVE the title and this line:
"Why is your heart nailing portraits of sorrow
against the crystal walls of my soul?"

This, is a truly kick-ass poem! I am very happy I took some down time from the grind and stopped in tonight!

A profound and beautiful piece.

A beauty!!

Love Tinka

Wow. Loved this, beautifully written and so very romantic, just outstanding.

Reindeer

Beautiful command of language here. The combination of mystical, sexual, and passionate love in this poem transcend reality and bring the reader directly to paradise through pain. You are truly perfecting your art. Peace, Peter

Aberjhani,
I think I got to the first, 'Just like that' before I realized I needed to start over and catch my breath. It was there when the impact of your words took my breath away. I knew from that point on, I was in for quite the treat.
I was. And I enjoyed every bite.
Amazing write.

Lisa

A stunning write, Aberjhani, with words that conjure pictures in the mind that are delicious and romantic - Just like that!! Well-done!! Peace. Joyce

After careful analysis of this lovely poem, its mix of beautiful, unique poetic language with the simple phrase "just like that," and its list of intriguing questions that indicate the speaker's confusion, I have determined that aside from the obvious (you have a standard Aberjhani wonder), this piece boils down to one phrase: "blind drunk." Romantic love is blind and while in it you're as irrational as the town drunk. Put some clothes on, people, and stop stumbling through the forest naked. Or is this poem about something else? Words can be so tricky. :-) I am curious about the word "jade." The word can have anything from spiritual connotations to implications of an adulterous woman. The latter would explain why the speaker doesn't just go to his love and stop asking so many questions. But then that would make "A Jade Hieroglyphic" = "The Scarlet Letter" Certainly, your poem offers food for thought. I have to ask is this from your novel?

A poem within a poem...of passionate love.

I sat here speechless, dumbstruck at the beauty of this passionate write, reading it over and over again. Exquisite!

The "just like that" really makes this poem- it makes the lines shout. Like this alot.

EdK said it! Reminds me of the classic "Casablanca" moves, only unique as a Moroccan box of tricks! As usual, lines, concepts and imagery to die for - especially like in this instance: "Why is my soul chiseling statues of tears inside the secret valleys of your smile?"... this melts me like an ice sculpture, Aberjhani! A most wonderful romantic journey which I look forward to seeing continued... TY LOL Kate xx

WOO! Aberjhani,
this is a masterpiece!You've enabled the reader to capture the
essense of your feeling! With Real Wisdom You Presented a perfect
balance of Your Heart and it's desire is pure and Phenomenal!
Exceptional Talent's Light Shines with Powerful Intensity!
May all Holy Blessings find YOU continually!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

It seems as though you have been waiting patiently for her for a very long time. She stepped forward and your heart recognized its mate by the echo of the sound of its rhythm beating in harmony with hers. Such blessings rain upon those who recognize the one who is the extension of self. Eloquent poetry, Aberjhani, with a message that pulses eternal within each of us.
Take care,
Sherry

The contents of this composition shine. It is a magnificent piece, which can enrich the Major Art if a proper revision is applied.

I enjoyed the reading of "A Jade Hieroglyphic".


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Your awesome word painting projects images upon the mind as superb as any master painting.Can there truly be a goddess who deserves such adoration? If so, fortunate is she to have met your pen;-)

Joy and Peace,
Eileen

Stunning metaphors.
That's the best way for love to happen..

Just like that: blind drunk on the wine of your eyes.
Just like that: torched by the sizzle of love without disguise.
Just like that: an epic and a vision locked inside heaven’s command.

It's amazing how love can happen - just like that; and this is quite a poem.

A fantastic orginal write!