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Valentine Letter for a Poet Gone to War

by Aberjhani — Read all 107 poems by Aberjhani

Monday, February 13, 2006

If in the midst of mannequin bombs
disemboweling pregnant insanity,

a poem of love should seduce your lips,

sing each soul-dazzling stanza

with such soft rapture as an angel might.

 

If your comrade’s head should explode

while you sing with such soft rapture as an
    angel might,

bandage your heart with thoughts of simpler
    things—

mowing the lawn, washing dishes,

waking up dreaming in your lover’s arms.

 

What can bombs know of the illuminated fields

so golden with heaven in your heart’s sacred
    lands?

How can bullets hope to penetrate the armor

of your soul’s endless capacity for love?

 

If death should suck the marrow from your
    bones

while you mow the lawn, wash dishes,

or wake up dreaming in your lover’s arms,

remember: you were born a child of light’s
    wonderful secret—

you return to the beauty you have always
    been.

 

Aberjhani

© 2/13/06

 
 
 

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Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
But knowing that my husband is working on machines as I write, I know that he has no taste for my rambling, and really just wants to get finished with his work without a bunch of interference. (Sigh)

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 19, 2006
I have never read a Valentine epitath before.

Ron

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 8, 2006
"...you return to the beauty you have always been"-how true, how sad, how beautiful yet bitter. How long will we demand blood sacrifice as a means to an end? The juxtaposition is particulary
powerful here...Lin

Reviewed by Miriam Center
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
Valentine is exquisite and heartwarming. You never cease to amaze me and I think I've told you so a million times. So make it a million and one.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 3, 2006
I agree with the board below Brother Aberjhani
You strike a perfect balance between War and Love, creating the right juxtaposition of words to embrace all, without offending others, a very skillful and delightful samba dance of a composition !
Peter

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
i appreciate the juxtaposition of peace and violence, and the interplay between them. word choice is, as always, perfection itself. the crafting of original imagery and the gentle touch you place upon the topics of your choice create the most amazing visuals.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on February 28, 2006
Such balance and tension is stunning, Aberjhani! You have seamlessly woven with delicate breath the horrific images of war with the romantic idylls of mortal existance of the living, creating a blessed Elysian effect. This is PARTICULARLY effective because of the gentle tone of the Voice you use for this piece, I think. Can almost taste and feel the contrast between the bitter, indiscriminate metallurgy of war and the unique, personal, soft and living bodies it impacts. "Disemboweling pregnant insanity" conjures strong and conflicting moral emotions... like war always does, I guess. A wonderful poem brilliantly conceptualised. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
remember: you were born a child of light’s
wonderful secret—

you return to the beauty you have always
been.


Perfection..
Your work leaves me and so many others ..speechless!

vesna;)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 27, 2006
This is a most moving poem, Aberjhani. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi
Reviewed on February 24, 2006
An enormous consolation (though I don't know the person this speaks of nor do I know the cause or the kind of war implied here). Thank you for this.

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on February 21, 2006
Sage words, Aberjhani. So much courage, strength and grace conveyed in this moving, beautifully penned work. The glow of that Light IS our constant source of comfort...
Peace and Blessings,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on February 18, 2006
What can I say that I have not said before, Aberjhani? Profound words that touch deeply the heart and the soul.

God bless, Aberjhani!

Sandie.

Reviewed on February 17, 2006
it seems to me the bullets are winning anyway when i mow the lawn
saludos robin & many thanks for your profound insightful comments
on my last few works, i was v impressed by them.

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on February 16, 2006
A stupendous, insightful and throughly uplifting beauty.


Paul;-)

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
Wow, very deep. In light of the alternative here, I'll take the simpler everyday of mowing the lawn, washing dishes, etc.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
Most beautiful Write Aberjhani!!

Happy Valentine my friend!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
Heart-rendering and beyond beautiful. First wrote "beautiful beyond belief," but one of the beauties of your work is that it is totally believable. 'Course, you have to believe in m a g i c.:) 'Pea' <3 ~~~ PS: Want to read this again. . .and again. . .and again. So inspiring! But I will have to space it out. In part because the poem is so rich and in part because. . .pain is all too
real. You truly are a magician. Peace and Love Beyond the Beyond, P

Reviewed by Martin Hebert (Reader)
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
~~Aberjhani~SO beautiful~thanks for sharing your gift of language~~

~~martin~~

Reviewed on February 14, 2006
FRIENDSHIP IS A GIFT IN ETERNITY OF LOVE AND APPRECIATION.

"Valentine Letter for a Poet Gone to War" leads the way to humanity and family's togetherness.

A golden page glowing for friensdhip, and to enrich the Major Art, adding value to The American Fine Letters.

I salute You, Sublime Poet!


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 14, 2006
bandage your heart with thoughts of simpler things—

Marvelous poetic sentiments to valiant soldiers everywhere this Valentine's Day, Aberjhani.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
One must be brave to face that which terrifies them and not back down. One must be secure in themself to do the job of a warrior and understand that there is a side, beyond the horrifying, that holds tranquility and love. Thank you for this stark comparative offering that reminds us each that love and war are not necessarily opposites, that they are often intermingled and that in each all is fair with no holds barred. Happy Valentines Day to you, _Aberjhani and to your Soldier-friend. God bless you both.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Thank you Aberjhani for the beauty you use alongside the brutal truth that shows the awful dichotomy of war and how it can be something we both abhor and applaud. Applaud the brave souls who fight it and abhor those who make it neccesary! Superb work!

Eileen^

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Can't add anything about this splendid poem that Jerry hasn't already covered so well in his comments.

Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Aberjhani,

This is absolutely marvelous; poetry at its best! Very well done; bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love (and prayers), your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Aberjhani,

Powerfully moving poetry...amidst the ugliness of war, there is beauty. It is your words. Bless you, Poet and friend.

(((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla.

Happy Valentine's Day...know you're in my heart and prayers.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
Aberjhani, this poem sinks into the heart like angel's tears. You have moved me in such a way that I know our troops who read this and miss their loves will cherish each line. Thank you for posting it for souls at war and us all. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 13, 2006
And around and around we go. The beauty those who do the fighting for us amid the carnage and misery they must endure, is something we can never really know, or understand. Even those who come back and try to tell us about the serenity they experience in the middle of a pitched battle,mhave a difficult time relaying those emotions. I like your poem, it is a soft reminder of what these men and women have left behind to do the job they are sent to do. It also give us, "If your comrade’s head should explode" ugliness because ugliness and war are one and the same. Moving poetry.


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