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Once The Whistle Blows
by L. G. Figgins → (All Poetry by L. G. Figgins)
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I would like to introduce my daughter, Amber Pasquali, another literary unknown...

All these men.
I see their faces,
in these crowded streets.

As if fallen birds -
their hearts like broken bone,
disfigured and mis-shapen.

Egos are like feathers
conscealing the transparent flesh,
which hides the confusion within.

Away from the rouphnecks,
jobs keep them civilized.

Once the whistle blows,
Find them clocking out.

from under their bosses'
or fathers' thumbs.

They watch the liquor poured,
throwing caution to the wind.

Their debts and duties---
as if the foaming head
of a lager,
--- to be blown off,
'till morning comes.

---Jan 02, 2000
Amber Pasquali©All rights Reserved

 

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 Reviews of "Once The Whistle Blows"
Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on May 22, 2005
She gets it from you, this is very good.

Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Linda,

Rhythm and verse that flow with style and grace - top-notch write!!


Best wishes,

Robert

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Splendid...keep on writing!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 22, 2005
Egos are like feathers

A marvelous thought

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
a very talented poet ... i really like the image of egos and feathers ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Wow! Two fine poets in the same family! Wonderful poem, keep writing!

Eileen

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Well I guess we literary unknowns will still together and the writes are always a joy.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Great write. Hmm do I prefer her writes to yours Linda..lol
We have a comedian with the same surname...

I refrain from using trite lingo..

But you are both good in your unique ways..

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
She's talented. Another case of the apple not falling fall from the tree. I mean that too.


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