This is so unique and stirring
it roars, and at the same time is gentle solid
bravo
pax A
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2005
Oh, my, Linda... What a discovery you are. With very poetic style you speak with the kind of honesty that refreshes, teaches and is enviable to those who wear a mask, I should think.
"No delicate flower wilting under the sun
I bear the weight of the world, and it has made me strong"
Those two lines rather took my breath away, so drawn to their bold truths they are. Reading this felt like waking up. You have a gift! katy xox
Yes, this poem tastes of the fertile ground it has been rooted upon, then sprouted, then bloomed, and then gave and shared fruit... and will again and again.
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2005
It's great that you are able
to look at yourself this way.
Linda, this is an excellent write. Remember, the righteous falls seven times, but the Lord bears her up. 'those who tripped you/have brought themselves down' I resonance with this one. Great, Linda.
Very inspiring Linda. A very good poem from a very good lady. Thnx for sharing hon, I enjoyed it immensely. May the Lord be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love, peace, & (((HUGS))), Barbie
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Hank
it roars, and at the same time is gentle solid
bravo
pax A
"No delicate flower wilting under the sun
I bear the weight of the world, and it has made me strong"
Those two lines rather took my breath away, so drawn to their bold truths they are. Reading this felt like waking up. You have a gift! katy xox
Grand, meaningful line: "I am a pregnant loaf full of life, kneaded from adversity ... "; succinctly superb write!!
Blessings,
Robert
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
to look at yourself this way.
Nicely written piece.
Blessings,
Joseph
Emeka Nwogu
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."