I cross mountains, lakes and rivers to hover in your plain of silent tears--
what beauty there is in a broken heart!
I am the one who kisses your temple as you drift to sleep--I inhale your incense-myrtle, sage and cedar that smoke undying embers.
I slip through the veil, place cool fingers on your fevered brow--you welcome me to the house of dreams
and my fluted strings pull to you.
We resound to rhythms of a hallowed drum--bboom, bboom, bboom and arch and step in pilgrimage to soulful prayer.
I am a devotee burning candles in the dark shadow of light--I blow out the match and the flame singes my fingers.
Your voice fades to an echoed chant in the distance as dawn enters the portals of my room--announcing my return.
I stretch for the sun and rub the golden crust from my eyes as you are enshrined in the vault of my heart.
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Reviews of "Communion"
Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)
Reviewed on May 11, 2005
This is an amazing well written gem, i got a lot of memories out of this, things i thought well forgot, thanks for a truly grand read, take care...Mark
We are all reaching out, but few of us can touch the love we hope to, we are all lost but few of us can find the way to someone who really
wants to know us. wonderful poem.
Beautiful and captivating, Linda, and reads almost like a Biblical Song of Songs in its devoted tenderness and with its tender but muscular passion: its the pull of the strings, the rhythm of the drum and the vault of the heart that give it this tensile quality. Gorgeous, thank you. Kate xx
Linda I agree with Eileen and Anita. This is such a beautiful metaphysical journey, that reaches into your inner self. Thnx for sharing dear, I enjoyed every mesmerizing moment. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and be with you always,a nd at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY SISTERLY HUGGGGGGSSSSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2005
UH OH-WARNING Linda. The sun is hotter than a match. So don't touch it..
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2005
What a wonderful way to connect with the life forces
which we are all a part of.
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wants to know us. wonderful poem.
The aerial photo so eloquently flows into your enthralling, enlightening write ... a beauteous, compelling piece!!
Blessings,
Robert
what beauty there is in a broken heart!"
You've got a talent of capturing the reader, with your first lines... then... we just read along, going on a beautiful journey... excellent write
"If I have to...Then I may as well be."
which we are all a part of.
Love & Light,
Joseph
Love&Light*
Alexandra*
how fortunate you are to have such a power of mind and spirit.
wow!
Most beautiful breathtaking poetry Linda!!
Love Tinka
Eileen