Critique (poem) by L. G. Figgins on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2005

if we don't evolve, we die.
well done, Linda.
many thanks for all your visits!
Carolyn

Reviewed on May 7, 2005

Excellent... How can anything from Jersey be in conflict? The Boss is spreading his wings and sharing his views, because like all of us he was Born to Run...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 7, 2005

I say, God Help Anyone Who Isn't
Conflicted On A Spiritual Level

And I'd say this is a great poem - Long Live the Boss!

Reviewed by Maria Lupinacci

Reviewed on May 7, 2005

Linda,

I like this, I like this a lot!

My absolute favorite in the poem:
"I say, God Help Anyone Who Isn't
Conflicted On A Spiritual Level"
Though, this is running a close second:
"I say, Your Hero Is Human Honey
And People Change"

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Wise truths expressed in these verses, Linda. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

unless we change with life's moods and motion, we cannot keep up with the pace of its clarity ... sounds like she's afraid to open her eyes ... she's afraid of change ...

good poem & point, Linda ...

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Quite the Q&A between opposites, and when Bruce S. rocks, watch out, buddy!

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Linda,

LOL!!!!!!!! Spot on!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

LOL. Somebody didn't go to critique school and get licensed. Guess she missed the part about judging the art and not the artist. Someone get the smelling salts for her if she ever visits my work from her blog haven. ;-)
Great lines in this, Linda.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

I always find suspect anyone who fears for another's soul. I doubt they would recognize spiritual growth if it bit them on the arse. "Better they clean up the mess inside." (Henry Higgins-My Fair Lady) Unfortunately they never recognize themselves, so busy preying on.

Nicely said and done.

Elizabeth

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Yep, beats me why we are so concerned about other people's slate when ours, by enlarge, is also pretty messed up! Scuse me while I just remove a few beams from beneath my contact lenses; the splinters are killing me! Born to Run, Hon! Looks like he oughta keep running from the likes of those who would leap before they look... God grant us humility and shorter noses! LOL Very Kewl Write, Kudos, Kate xx

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

LOL oh that last line........you are a brave one Linda
Did you think it or say it lol

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Great message poem Linda!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

It's true ... so many people get them selves so tied up in knots about other people's lives but forget to look in the mirror.

Nice couplets here.

Peace,
Joseph

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

i agree with you one hundred percent linda

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Well said Linda...I'm dark and scary but nice with it lol.

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on May 6, 2005

Here! Here! This puts it exactly
the way I feel about that thinking.
Don't subscribe to it, and "I say
Go Back To Wonderland And Try Not
To Open Your Eyes" ;) Love that line!
Great piece Linda!