good one

you accomplished capturing my imagination is this skillful poetic offering ...

The molten sun
Flares in disgust .... luv those lines ...

This is just gorgeous and oozes with that first "sensual awakening" that burns with an unsullied and pure appetite of desire that, in our moments of suddenly dissolving innocence, can then quickly turn into confusion and guilt... hmmm... have I ever got beyond that wonderful adolescence, I wonder?! You are a wonderfully cinematic writer. This is nostaligic and evocative and puts me right back into those endless sunshiney days of high summer on the farm, toying with all the arousing sights and senses of being a girl in a man's world... think I might just keep this one! :)) LOL Kate xx

Very insightful write :-)

Skillful use of repetition in this write, Linda. Great read aloud. Highly effective, provocative, and smoldering with passion. ~~Nordette

This is very profound and has deep meaning.

And then we do it again. God only knows why. I suspect it is the entire meaning of our existence, or something like that.

A piercing write that stirred echoes of Federico Garcia Lorca's famous meditations on green. Love the way your lines travel from the far reaches of outer space to the most sensitive indefensible areas of psychic inner space. An enjoyable read.

Most powerfully written!!

love Tinka

A truly powerful piece, Linda.

Are you spying on me?
Too close for comfort...wow.
I'm saying I can relate.
Wow.
John

Excellent... as always...

We wait in fear
Of wanting so much

A powerful line and how our lives are run by that one word - fear

Beautiful and so haunting Linda!
"The stars burn incredulous Hold the memory eternal"
What a line! and if only I woulda thought
of it. ;)