Now, now let's be nice. I would call Andy a lovable rascal. Thanks to all. A kiss to Felix. Dale, I can just hear you laughing! No, this isn't my choice of form. And the proof can be judged by the time it took and the curses counted. I think it only fair that when Kate is less deluged with other priorities she should give it a go :)...Ty Lin
...I'm not stupid, Andy... I don't undertake challenges that I have no way of winning! :)) But, my, Linda, this is so very beautiful as you delicately tease out the warp and the weave of the nature of the msytical essence of Love. Indeed, as Sherry has said, this reads like precious golden links in a chain, or the loops in a lovers' knot. And 18 couplets!! Wow! The last four in particular just float me away into... bliss! You make this feel as easy as breathing. Just love it, and thank you so much for taking up the call! I SALUTE you! LOL Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
They all read like little pearls of wisdom..
Nicely done too.
Trust Kate to set a challenge she never did herself.
This is fantastic, Linda. I was so unsure on this form as I found it so many ways. Your couplets are each so beautiful and combined they embrace one another to form a verse of perfection.
Take care,
Sherry
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Felix
But this is brilliant...and give me a much better Idea of what a "Ghazal " is suppose to be...tee-hee Kate...good answer to Andious!!
Love Tinka
can rhyme. lol Really very nice Linda!
Nicely done too.
Trust Kate to set a challenge she never did herself.
Take care,
Sherry