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Depths of Love/K. Burnside Challenge
by L. G. Figgins → (All Poetry by L. G. Figgins)
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This is in response to Kate's "Ghazal" challenge. OK, I fudged and made EVERY couplet rhyme, but there are eighteen!

Oh love, what laughter's joys reveal
Worldly woe from my heart doth steal

In love, as life, a dream we weave
The sum of what our minds conceive

Time suspended in tender affection
Shallow illusion is spared reflection

For twin souls afloat on starry sea
The book of time may well decree

Their course will twine forevermore
Infinity graces the golden door

For those whose love in truth be true
The depths of honesty's wealth accrue

The richest trove of heaven's light
A beacon set staid in darkest night

To shine on shores littered with stone
From wisdom's well of sorrow known-

The stormy seas within our pain
That rips our sails for horizon's gain

What joy could be if not for this?
What worth revealed in a kiss?

Or thrill in the whisper of sighs?
The fathoms in a lover's eyes?

The warmth of a hand's caress?
A lei in an island of tenderness?

In dire straights love turns the wheel
Keeps the boat on an even keel

Balances hope apon the waves
When faith is strong, despair it staves

For joy a heart can scarce contain
When nurtured by a gentle rain

Peace beyond our stubborn will
Rests in forgiveness time instills

In constant praise to you impart
The prayers within a grateful heart

Thus carried by eternal tides
The ebb and flow of love abides


(c) Linda Gayton 2005














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 Reviews of "Depths of Love/K. Burnside Challenge"
Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
Now, now let's be nice. I would call Andy a lovable rascal. Thanks to all. A kiss to Felix. Dale, I can just hear you laughing! No, this isn't my choice of form. And the proof can be judged by the time it took and the curses counted. I think it only fair that when Kate is less deluged with other priorities she should give it a go :)...Ty Lin

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
Very well done Linda, this is as sweet and natural as the writer.

Felix

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
Lol at Andy...he is a sweetie most of the time....lol!!

But this is brilliant...and give me a much better Idea of what a "Ghazal " is suppose to be...tee-hee Kate...good answer to Andious!!

Love Tinka


Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
Proves that even a free form writer
can rhyme. lol Really very nice Linda!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
...I'm not stupid, Andy... I don't undertake challenges that I have no way of winning! :)) But, my, Linda, this is so very beautiful as you delicately tease out the warp and the weave of the nature of the msytical essence of Love. Indeed, as Sherry has said, this reads like precious golden links in a chain, or the loops in a lovers' knot. And 18 couplets!! Wow! The last four in particular just float me away into... bliss! You make this feel as easy as breathing. Just love it, and thank you so much for taking up the call! I SALUTE you! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 11, 2005
They all read like little pearls of wisdom..
Nicely done too.

Trust Kate to set a challenge she never did herself.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 10, 2005
rhyme works well. nice job! Dawn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on September 10, 2005
This is fantastic, Linda. I was so unsure on this form as I found it so many ways. Your couplets are each so beautiful and combined they embrace one another to form a verse of perfection.
Take care,
Sherry


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