I am a universe of one Within me is all I can know To seek external authority beyond my conciousness is to subdue the spark the spark which led Copernicus thinking independently to bring us out of the darkness of superstition, evolving man
I am a universe of one my destiny is in my hands to mold with God-given skill and effort Too long the power of mind has been subjugated by those seeking control of earth and man We will creation into being We can create a new world
I love the rhythm of your piece, Linda, it fits the sense of an unpatterned patterned belief, that we can change the world. Another thought is how 'I' became 'We' in each 'period' of thought.
I am a reader of beginnings and ends of verse, and yours are precisely delivered.
One person can make a difference, in their own lifes and the lfes of those around us. We have to start somewhere and I think you say it best with this poem of hope.
Fee
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2006
Everything derives from our imagining and minds..
It makes our heaven; hell, or our hell; heaven..
I like the idea of this piece Lin! I used
to always say the universe wouldn't exist
if I didn't lol which really is saying without
consciousness how can it exist. That's the one
reason I have a problem with people who say after
this life there is nothing. I don't believe that.
"We will creation into being We can create a new
world" Absolutely! Excellent!
Yes dear Lin! And you are a wonderful universe as shown by your verses. Thank you for sharing yourself. It is a gift most appreciated. Love and peace to you,
We are structurd by an educatuinal system that sets limits. There are NO limits to what is the "unknown". Those of us who ventire out know that we can do anything as long as we believe in the power within ourselves.
Susan
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 10, 2006
We do, absolutely, have our destiny within our grasp. Sometimes the unexpected happens to derail that destiny, but with faith and perseverance, we can still achied it. Good.
Oh what power the human mind and spirt possess
You are so correct
But sadly, myself included, many ignore this sourse of renewal and potential
this inspires
paz
Anita
linda
Powerful and exhorting words of dynamism
I totally agree, we can will and create our own reality, by being
partakers with the Higher Power, in designing our own destiny...
Peter
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I am a reader of beginnings and ends of verse, and yours are precisely delivered.
I=Me=We.
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Fee
It makes our heaven; hell, or our hell; heaven..
to always say the universe wouldn't exist
if I didn't lol which really is saying without
consciousness how can it exist. That's the one
reason I have a problem with people who say after
this life there is nothing. I don't believe that.
"We will creation into being We can create a new
world" Absolutely! Excellent!
is in my hands to mold
It truly is, Linda; and quite a powerful piece.
Regis
Susan
You are so correct
But sadly, myself included, many ignore this sourse of renewal and potential
this inspires
paz
Anita
Powerful and exhorting words of dynamism
I totally agree, we can will and create our own reality, by being
partakers with the Higher Power, in designing our own destiny...
Peter
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