Our lives unknown and uncharted souls flung outward into space So much cosmic dust to contemplate I think of love and beauty that dazzling beauty, undone What do we make of ash that remains? We tread in dust and leave our footprints behind us Always behind when reaching forward Always behind when looking back I am footloose now and desire some solid ground beneath me for changes are coming on fast The press breaks the skin of the grape and the juices run staining the fabric no matter how we pre-treat or soak How I wish I could hold the bright white softness of old cotton tenderness against the heat of the world Tenderness so rare save from my granddaughter's cool fingers or a breeze blown from coastal water I long for the womb when life comes undone but it spit us out into the brillant light blind then continually burns our eyes half open while we cling to some pretense of control always behind when reaching forward always behind when looking back
I love the imagery in this Linda...I guess it means we're pretty much an unbalanced lot, or perhaps lost, would be more appropriate. Still a superb piece.
Mmmm... particularly - as you will know! - love the allusions to the cotton - so pure, so resiliant and a natural protection that weathers and survives so well, yet is always so newly fresh and crisp when laundered.... great allegory here, as always. Some wonderful lines and images, Linda.
And I haven't forgotten about the Eagles report... but, in brief... it was GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! :))) LOL Kate xx
We are lost when we come into this world and then found by those around us. Later when we are lost all we desire is to be found and when found our rescue only breeds contentment for a short time. Until the realization of true life sets in....... "Tenderness so rare save from my Granddaughter's cool fingers" Such an excellent line and poem. I can really relate. Pierre.
"Tenderness so rare except from my granddaughters fingers..." I can so understand and appreciate this poem and especially that line. Well done and said.
Regis
Aberjhani
This is some imagery for imaginings.
Excellent Lin!
Paul;-)
And I haven't forgotten about the Eagles report... but, in brief... it was GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!!!!!! :))) LOL Kate xx
Ron
Love Tinka
the more we leave behind.
Always!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
thank you,
susan
Fee
Tis true...we are but dust in the wind...
Peter