the same bleary eyed sun greets you at the door on your way to your prison where everyone smiles politely and the politics are correct and the men have papers of someone else's life and the women have photos of the strangers they live with
you shuffle your files to the beat of a clock your only heaven the sound of a bell
you come home to empty envelopes vacant art and listless furnishings all mail order blessings for an eight hour life
and as you drink your imported beer smoke your crutch the last birds of daylight call to you the sun reaching desperate fingers over the face of dusk fighting its way through your window calling you out to live
the person you were whistles by your window daring you to catch the spell as you retreat from the light and retire to your bed
the last birds of daylight lamenting your death in a language you no longer speak nor understand
This is absolutely fantastic, A.! The mood, tone and language set the stage in artificial light. This is the life of millions, confined in cubicles. God has spared me this day-to-day grind and I thank him...
Not on my job or life, but I seem to recall an old joke as to "if you don't believe in life after death, you should be at a job when 5pm and quitting time comes along!" As always from you sir, excellent...Ed & rufuz (w00f)
This is an awesome portrayal of many lives today. A droning existence that doesn't lend you anything past the norm. I love the third stanza, it really shows what the numbing process does to continue the cycle of everyday life.
Still Living on my Feet is the follow up to Tichaona Chinyelu’s first book, In the Whirlwind, which was rooted in a sense of hard-hitting revolutionary black love. However, in this sophomore effort, Tichaona brings the revolutionary essence from deep
Spot on! :) Many are just existing--that's it. No life--BRILLIANT write! Superb imagery--and I agree, those last two verses--WOW!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Paul;-]
M.Rose
last two stanzas exceptional!
Eileen