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A Forbidden Love
by Barbara Lynn Terry → (All Poetry by Barbara Lynn Terry)
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What can ever become of a forbidden love?


A Forbidden Love

by Barbara Lynn Terry

He was in my fifth grade class,
The sixth grade too,
I looked at him with eyes of love,
But all I could do was fast,
Because he never saw this dove,
Who had eyes only for his love.

I dreamed my silly dreams,
Of a love that would make me scream,
In my thoughts and my desire,
But he could only mire,
My most humble being,
And went about without seeing,
The girl in me, that loved him so.

I dreamed that one day I would ask,
That in the sun, we would bask,
Showing the world our soulful passion,
And we would be a couple in our fashion,
Of a love that just could not be,
Because it was only in my dreams.

I sat there on that day of eternal love,
And wondered if he ever could of,
Been my very loving Valentine,
The man I hoped would be mine.

  

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 Reviews of "A Forbidden Love"
Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on December 4, 2010

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 28, 2009
Very much enjoyed this one. I get lost in your work Barbara. You are so gifted.

Hugs,
Anna

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on May 23, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!! 'Who had eyes only for his love'---------EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on February 8, 2006
When I was going up, they called it puppy love. But I declare it was the real deal, felt like real love to me. Barbie, I like this one, you penned it well.

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on February 1, 2006
Aah, what a nostalgic write, Barbie.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg
Reviewed on January 30, 2006
Very sad and soul baring...I think we have all known something like this...hugs to you!!

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on January 30, 2006
Sad and poignant and. . .this poem will have universal appeal,
I feel. Who past the age of 9 or 10 {or even younger} has not
longer for a glance or a word from The One--? Cupid can be so
cruel. It is one thing to have loved and lost, but to have
loved and never begun to possess breaks the heart and pierces
the soul. Not to make too much of childhood attachments, but
on the other hand, children ?still know how to love? Thank
you for this sensitive and lovingly-executed Valentine. 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on January 29, 2006
Nice pre-Valentine write, Barbie. Tells of an attraction and puts your very own toe on the line. Blessed Be.

Sage

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 28, 2006
Sweet write Barbie, Well done indeed.

Felix

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 28, 2006
You bare your soul and share your feelings honestly through your verses, Barbie. Thank you for sharing this. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis


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