Oh yes!! Just love this show of grit and determination, this desire to "hang on in there" and endure, to weather and to commit. I applaud both the sentiment and the startlingly good and honest portrayal of this situation. Very cleverly done - can feel both the fatigue and the endurance. Beautifully expressed, too, Sandy. TY Kate xx
Intriguing and striking thoughts on teleological and ontological
subjects through the lines of "Not Over Yet" are mind developer
delivering awareness and wise message.
On this Poetry's Revelation Era, "Not Over Yet" adds colors to
the rainbows of wisdom.
Sandy this is what makes or breaks a relationship, not so much the fighting but sometimes the lack of it and you sum it up with your last line as long as you both have something left worth arguing about there is always a chance. When there is nothing left to say it is over. Great mastery of your subject and your feelings.
LOVED IT!!! You managed to put into words thoughts that we hesitate to entertain about our relationships. And you put the words together magnificently.
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
Each person is but a grain of sand resting beside the sea. This thought sets the tone for Jill Eisnaugle’s latest poetry collection, Beside Still Waters.
Bob H
like someone said this what makes or breaks
enjoyed
Definitely "top-drawer" all the way ... very profound ... well-written!!
Best wishes,
Robert
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Intriguing and striking thoughts on teleological and ontological
subjects through the lines of "Not Over Yet" are mind developer
delivering awareness and wise message.
On this Poetry's Revelation Era, "Not Over Yet" adds colors to
the rainbows of wisdom.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi-YEHU
Felix