Jamie's crying ( in progress) (poem) by Tony J. May Sr. on AuthorsDen

Jamie's crying ( in progress)
by Tony J. May Sr. → (All Poetry by Tony J. May Sr.)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Where does every event, circumstance, or hardship began, and "who" notices the drama of LIFE
Jamie's crying ************************ In the silence .. of .... The warmth of sun A gentle nudge Of morining ... Has just begun Witnessed by .. What must be ...the Love of God Caressed And then set free With ... Just a thought "Comfort and be with ... This ... child of mine ... Keep her... Hold her close Then, as she cries" "Echo and be heard On ... Every breeze ... Throught out all Creation ... And while she's ... On her knees" (Chorus) When ... she's crying! If..she's crying! I'm crying ... Jamie's crying!!! As she's crying! And she's crying! I'm crying ... Jamie's crying!!! Somewhere here and there Among the seasons .. Of it all Cold snow on winter evenings Summer rain and waterfalls Dark skies And stars devine Early morning dew ... No matter what we're facing No matter what we do (Chorus) When ... she's crying! If..she's crying! he is crying ... Because she's crying!!! If we're crying! As we're crying! He is crying ... Beside us crying!!! ��

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on September 17, 2005

This is such a beautiful song-- wonderful imagery too-Warmly,Sheee

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 30, 2005

God not only notices , but directs all the drama and destiny of our lifes
A beautiful and heart rending composition Tony !
"Where does every event, circumstance, or hardship began, and "who" notices the drama of LIFE..
"
Peter

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Oh, this is heart-breaking, excellently expressed,

Reindeer