your voice, a panpipe made from the wing bones of a condor.
In hat and poncho, you herd llamas along a wind-eroded ledge.
I am a brickmaker, a lesbian woman, a desperado, building a brick gateway to the sun, stylized with motifs of the condor and dice.
The condor and I are one, lofty birds, wide-wing seekers of higher places.
The dice and I are sexual gamblers, We roll for you, are your numbers coming up?
When you drive your llama herd by my masonwork, I see your nipples protruding through your white satin blouse, your poncho over your shoulders, you're so hot.
I give you a dipper of cool water and trace my finger across your parched lips, you say your name is Greensleeves.
I make a pair of brick dice for you, stamp the dots with my nipples in the wet mud, imprinting me to take with you.
You wash my nipples with the brush dipped in water after I stamp each numerical sequence, so that I may stamp the next sequence flawlessy ... one, two, three, four, five .... six.
When the brick dice dry, you, Greensleeves can rest your nipples in the dot indentations and we become as one.
I find your image woven into ancient fabric,
your voice, a panpipe made from the wing bones of a condor.
Renaissance.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman.
Extraordinary fusion of inverted ( or are they subverted?) cultural images, spiritual mythological sensibility, and womanist eroticism. The creative originality and sensual intensity of this write for me make it a very powerful piece.
The thing is, after all that stamping of the dice and the cleaning of the nipples, you have woven yourself an indelible saga of brickmason and llama heardmistress (Is that right? heardmistress? Sound good to me.) She carries away with her proof of your desire and you are left with chapped nipples. LOL Gotta love it!!!
An excellent piece de resistance sculpted and molded with exquisite precision and professional integrity Sage !
Absolutely sizzling with passion and desire, you set the Den ablaze tonite
The soaring condor symbolizes your free spirit and indomitable courage
which marks you out as a warrior of the pen, fearless and unorthodox, you readily go where angels fear to tread, in hot pursuit of creative excellence and total expression
Ride on Queen of the Den !
Peter
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Innovation is your poetic passion, Sage!
eT
Beautifully crafted and presented, I enjoyed this one; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Absolutely sizzling with passion and desire, you set the Den ablaze tonite
The soaring condor symbolizes your free spirit and indomitable courage
which marks you out as a warrior of the pen, fearless and unorthodox, you readily go where angels fear to tread, in hot pursuit of creative excellence and total expression
Ride on Queen of the Den !
Peter
good write
jphn+
Susan