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Greensleeves For the Condor
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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I find your image woven
into ancient fabrics,

your voice, a panpipe made
from the wing bones of
a condor.

In hat and poncho,
you herd llamas along a
wind-eroded ledge.

I am a brickmaker,
a lesbian woman, a
desperado, building
a brick gateway to
the sun, stylized with
motifs of the condor
and dice.

The condor and I
are one, lofty birds,
wide-wing seekers
of higher places.

The dice and I
are sexual gamblers,
We roll for you,
are your numbers
coming up?

When you drive
your llama herd by
my masonwork, I
see your nipples
protruding through
your white satin
blouse, your poncho
over your shoulders,
you're so hot.

I give you a dipper
of cool water and
trace my finger across
your parched lips, you
say your name is
Greensleeves.

I make a pair of brick
dice for you, stamp the
dots with my nipples in
the wet mud, imprinting 
me to take with you.

You wash my nipples
with the brush dipped
in water after I stamp
each numerical sequence,
so that I may stamp
the next sequence
flawlessy ... one, two,
three, four, five .... six.

When the brick dice dry,
you, Greensleeves can rest
your nipples in the dot
indentations and we become
as one.

I find your image woven
into ancient fabric,

your voice, a panpipe made
from the wing bones of
a condor.

Renaissance.


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman.

 

 

 


 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Greensleeves For the Condor"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 12, 2006
luv the texture of your images in this poem, Sage ... the condor speaks loud and clearly ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Your beliefs are so deeply embedded they permeate all you do.
Innovation is your poetic passion, Sage!

eT

Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Sage,

Beautifully crafted and presented, I enjoyed this one; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Extraordinary fusion of inverted ( or are they subverted?) cultural images, spiritual mythological sensibility, and womanist eroticism. The creative originality and sensual intensity of this write for me make it a very powerful piece.

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Very 'lofty' prose with a dash of erotic...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
The thing is, after all that stamping of the dice and the cleaning of the nipples, you have woven yourself an indelible saga of brickmason and llama heardmistress (Is that right? heardmistress? Sound good to me.) She carries away with her proof of your desire and you are left with chapped nipples. LOL Gotta love it!!!

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
An excellent piece de resistance sculpted and molded with exquisite precision and professional integrity Sage !
Absolutely sizzling with passion and desire, you set the Den ablaze tonite
The soaring condor symbolizes your free spirit and indomitable courage
which marks you out as a warrior of the pen, fearless and unorthodox, you readily go where angels fear to tread, in hot pursuit of creative excellence and total expression
Ride on Queen of the Den !
Peter

Reviewed by john zimmerman
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
rivetting, passionfilled, and pasionate
good write
jphn+

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
You are one with the Condor and the spirit world claims you as a sister. Your poems are fluid drops of pure passion.
Susan


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