Wildhorses (poem) by Sage Sweetwater on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 17, 2006

What is it about
women, wildhorses, and
lust?

Great question, Sage. Makes me think. Makes me wonder about me. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on March 17, 2006

Another good one!

Reviewed by Robin Labenberg

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Ahhh, so now you are for rent? Good write Sage..I like the image of dirty women ohh dusty ..seriously I rode once and the horse knew it and walked right into the middle of a lake and stayed there..I love dthe 3rd stanza even though I joked but not sure I get the third one..why did they cry for a month? I could say that about my foster kids minus the lust of COURSE but I think I may have been the only one crying if they stay for that month..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

i've often asked the same question to myself ...

this was a great ride ...

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

fantastic poem.loved the word play.

Reviewed by Blue Sleighty

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I adore you. Great poem. Let's get to work.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Sage,

Yee Haw! Love the wildness in this one--untamable; unbroken; free to roam the countryside!!!!!! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Yee Haa Sage....
You are back in the saddle again, with a vengeance
It takes a lot to put a good woman down...:)
Keep them doggies rolling, rawhide !
Peter

Reviewed by Gordon Rosenberg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

ooh ya...

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

I agree with Jerry Sage! You penned a gem with this one! We all have to ask that question once in awhile,otherwise we get stale from being in a rut...

Eileen

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Great poem and question dear Sage! As is said, always honour the question. The answers often change, but not the question!!
I love this line too:
"...Caught in the stirrup,
from the kiss..." Gorgeous!
Love & Wildhorses Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Damn, but you outdid yourself with the wordplay in this one, Sage. I mean, "written in horsehair ink," and "braided memories,/ free-reigning lust," never mind that the poem itself was just fucking good!!!

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 16, 2006

Excellent write, Sage; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D