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The Ballad of the Highway Girl
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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She drives in the dark
all night,
thinkin' about it bein' time
to get it right.

She sits crumpled up
against the fence
in the day,
thinkin' it's time to burn
out the fence line demons
and pray,

Her role in life's drama
complete,
she feels the
boundaries of tormented
heat,

To all of the women
that have been in her
life, she wishes to say
something more than
thank you.

The images in her mind
are text vignettes that
the memories have been
selected by her work
done over the years.

She guesses the images
in her life's collection are
a recollection to what she
was really doing out there
most of the time.

She once knew a wizened
older, much older woman
who told about older times,
when the country and women
were more open and happy,
with fewer fences and gates to
slow a woman down.

She thinks that there seems to be
gates in our lives that some will
never be able to open, but her,
she has a place that is special, of
course, others see that place
differently.

Her images can never be taken
away from her.  You see, she
loves deeply enough, there is
a part of it within her to the end.

This is how she feels about this
place she calls Highway.  She'll
drive down the road for awhile and
think about where she's been and
where she's going.  That's why this
poem exists.


 


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman.


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 Reviews of "The Ballad of the Highway Girl"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 28, 2006
Symbolic and meaningful; thank you for sharing this beautiful ballad, Sage. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
"That's why this
poem exists."
Sage, this is a beautiful ballad!
"To all of the women
that have been in her
life, she wishes to say
something more than
thank you..."
That you do!
Love, Suzie :-D

Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Panoramic, moving, and universal. This piece is a highway anda lifescape unto itself.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
You show us that to overcome obstacles and roadblocks, we must have an open and receptive mind and intuition, not to be put off by self imposed barriers and impediments, and always to follow our hearts..
You are a clever and innovative woman, Sage !
Peter

Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Excellent write, Sage; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
It has taken me many years to understand that these gates which are padlocked to keep us out are in reality minds that are closed to the idea that, if there is a padlock, there is a key. If there are obstacles and hurdles and roadblocks in our way, there are alternative routes to take. Looking back is something I have spent not a few hours doing, myself. That, then, is the real unlocked gate, we cannot undo it, it is sealed shut. I like it when I read poems such as this, because it tells me the author of it is aware of his/her immortality. That, in my opinion, is a good thing, it allows us to follow that highway of life with a much different set of eyes. Very good, Sage.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
the highway of experience will never end ... this poem exists to portray its far reaching vision ...

Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Sage,

The open highway, oh, such freedom in your words! I adore this one; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
On the road some find peace, others find a piece, and still others find life at the end of their trip...E & R

Reviewed by Daniel McTaggart
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
The road as teacher and healer. Well done.

Reviewed by totally anonymous (Reader)
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
excellent write

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Very sultry ballad...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 26, 2006
Excellent poem Sage! Our lives are full of ups and downs smiles and frowns. We are raised with standards, rules ,laws,doctrines, denominations, all of us different backgrounds , colors, creeds, in a way I'm amazed that we are doing as well as we are. It takes time to break down barriers that have been applied for generations, and some can never do it. There are things that are unaceptable to many and they can't cross that line. Yet there are many who have made the adjustment, and it is those who we can reason with that we must be content with. Not everyone can cross that road, and they shouldn't be forced. Friendship is only good when its honest. I like this write, thanks for sharing it!

Eileen


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