She drives in the dark all night, thinkin' about it bein' time to get it right.
She sits crumpled up against the fence in the day, thinkin' it's time to burn out the fence line demons and pray,
Her role in life's drama complete, she feels the boundaries of tormented heat,
To all of the women that have been in her life, she wishes to say something more than thank you.
The images in her mind are text vignettes that the memories have been selected by her work done over the years.
She guesses the images in her life's collection are a recollection to what she was really doing out there most of the time.
She once knew a wizened older, much older woman who told about older times, when the country and women were more open and happy, with fewer fences and gates to slow a woman down.
She thinks that there seems to be gates in our lives that some will never be able to open, but her, she has a place that is special, of course, others see that place differently.
Her images can never be taken away from her. You see, she loves deeply enough, there is a part of it within her to the end.
This is how she feels about this place she calls Highway. She'll drive down the road for awhile and think about where she's been and where she's going. That's why this poem exists.
Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist, brainchild of Sage Sweetwater Creative Properties, flagship of Stone Creek Woman.
"That's why this
poem exists."
Sage, this is a beautiful ballad!
"To all of the women
that have been in her
life, she wishes to say
something more than
thank you..."
That you do!
Love, Suzie :-D
Reviewed by Missy Cross (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
Panoramic, moving, and universal. This piece is a highway anda lifescape unto itself.
You show us that to overcome obstacles and roadblocks, we must have an open and receptive mind and intuition, not to be put off by self imposed barriers and impediments, and always to follow our hearts..
You are a clever and innovative woman, Sage !
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 27, 2006
It has taken me many years to understand that these gates which are padlocked to keep us out are in reality minds that are closed to the idea that, if there is a padlock, there is a key. If there are obstacles and hurdles and roadblocks in our way, there are alternative routes to take. Looking back is something I have spent not a few hours doing, myself. That, then, is the real unlocked gate, we cannot undo it, it is sealed shut. I like it when I read poems such as this, because it tells me the author of it is aware of his/her immortality. That, in my opinion, is a good thing, it allows us to follow that highway of life with a much different set of eyes. Very good, Sage.
Excellent poem Sage! Our lives are full of ups and downs smiles and frowns. We are raised with standards, rules ,laws,doctrines, denominations, all of us different backgrounds , colors, creeds, in a way I'm amazed that we are doing as well as we are. It takes time to break down barriers that have been applied for generations, and some can never do it. There are things that are unaceptable to many and they can't cross that line. Yet there are many who have made the adjustment, and it is those who we can reason with that we must be content with. Not everyone can cross that road, and they shouldn't be forced. Friendship is only good when its honest. I like this write, thanks for sharing it!
When the powers-that-be make the decision to return a selfish party-girl, Zara, to Earth on three missions of redemption, can romance and mayhem be far behind? One hot and trendy gay nightclub, two bickering angels and three unlikely pairs add up to
Regis
poem exists."
Sage, this is a beautiful ballad!
"To all of the women
that have been in her
life, she wishes to say
something more than
thank you..."
That you do!
Love, Suzie :-D
You are a clever and innovative woman, Sage !
Peter
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
The open highway, oh, such freedom in your words! I adore this one; well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Eileen