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Midnight In Montgomery: Chapter Two
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traded her shotgun in for
a parlor derringer, before the
Brothel Inspector burned down
the brothel, a crime of passion said
to have infuriated her, an old rhyme from
the Gold Rush days, "The miners came in
forty-nine, the whores in fifty-one, they rolled
upon the bar room floor and made the native son."

her whore was a farmer's
daughter with no other way
to make a living along the frontier,
the railroad men hung their red brakeman's
lanterns outside the door when engaged with
her whore, the woman she fell in love with,

the Brothel Inspector,
not so different from the
Madam, made the job for
herself to control the red light
district, wore her Brothel Inspector
badge for the Old West government
collected her pay, she planned to burn
the bordello to the ground one day, Midnight
in Montgomery, she wrote out her resignation,
put flame to her resignation letter, threw it in the
wastebasket and tossed it into the side of the brothel
with her whore lying naked in their bed, her soiled dove
fled out the backdoor, stole a horse at the livery stable, put miles between the Brothel Inspector and the law,

in St. Joseph, Missouri,
wanted dead or alive, the
former Brothel Inspector steps
down off her horse, the pawn shop
bridle, saddle, and reins her whore
pawned along the way led her to her
crime of passion, her soiled dove inside
a room above the Pony Express, her once
beautiful face now scarred from the smallpox
epidemic, which Sweetwater westernizes their
lives, outlaw women's lives are as much social as
they are sexual, characters with a nostalgic pull, parlors, rooms of harlots, a saloon to enjoy a drink and a sexual encounter...{Sage Sweetwater, firebrand}


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

Midnight in Montgomery Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater
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 Reviews of "Midnight In Montgomery: Chapter Two"
Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
You have got to get a movie deal for your work because it is so visual. It's almost an historic/erotic (histerotic?) version of Hong Kong cinema -- vivid, well-paced, colorful. Your words paint wonderful images.

Sonny G

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on September 23, 2006
Nice mixing of wild west myth with the reality of brutal lives in a harsh environment.
I enjoyed making the movie in my head.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
This is powerful, Sage -- excellently written. I commend you -- the way you write, I felt as though I was there and living through this.
Again, very powerful stuff.
Hugs and respect,
CJ

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
You describe this as though you were the voyuer a hundred years ago and you were, I'm sure that your spitit is just that strong and I'm glad you share it with us.

Susan

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
I have to agree with Jerry Sage. You are a brilliant person and a natural writer.

With Affection,
Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 22, 2006
You have got a good'n going here, with this second installment, very complimentary to the first one. You are a first-rate writer, Sage, you will probably reap some rewards ( I mean REAL rewards) someday and I hope I am around to see it when you do. You have the knack. the knack is not something you can learn, the knack is born in you. You, my friend have it. Mainstream? Hell no, but I still feel that someday, your name will be well known . . . globally!


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