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I Fought The Law
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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revival tent
McCabe held
her Bible to vent,
"I Fought The Law
and the Law Won,"
she wasn't done,

I walked
through the
tent flap door,
fell to my knees
on the sawdust floor,
took out my bottle of
whiskey, laid down my
nativity scene I carved
from Aspen, laid 'em all
down, Jesus, angels, candle
sticks from dried fruitless branches
of the olive tree, "Bethlehem to ya,
McCabe!" my pagan talent held her
eye,

"Someone ordain
this firebrand woman,
Blessed Be an' it harm
none, do what ye will!"
McCabe woke my whiskey
takin' a nap in the sawdust
manger, her blue eyes drank
in my lust, "I Fought The Law
and The Law Won," she lit the
censer, smudged the congregation
with cinnamon balsam,

I remembered the
sweet smell of whiskey
on her breath that night,
the jewelry fit tight, silver
handcuffs, she sang "I Fought
the Law and the Law Won,"
McCabe drunk, probation over,
I'm no longer the law, still a pagan,
she's a Christian and sober,

revival tent
I stood with
my bottle of
whiskey to vent,
Waylon's spirit fed
me the lines, "She's
a Good-Hearted Woman,"
enough said...


Copyright 2006 Sage Sweetwater, firebrand
lesbian novelist
 



  

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 Reviews of "I Fought The Law"
Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on November 27, 2007
I had never read this one before, Sage. Thanks for putting it up here! Obviously, I enjoyed it. : )

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on December 22, 2006
Wonderful write.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Zahala San Simone
Reviewed on December 8, 2006
Now I'll be humming that song all day--I Fought the Law and Law Won! LOL!

This piece was captivating through and through.

Wendi

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
you certainly live by your own law, Sage ... excellent write, Sage ...

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
Yet another fine poetic tale, Sage. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
i hough it was gunna be the clash, the write kewl, but where is the clash...

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on December 7, 2006
Excellent write!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Aberjhani
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
Excellent work from a totally excellent pen.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 6, 2006
I think this is fantastic Sage, all the elements for a good born again movie, the booze, the revival, the lovers....


Fee


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