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Final Countdown: Vital Organs
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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blood flow, libido
races, midnight
2013,

sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,

let the 2013 lavender
dressing gown drop,
sex for 10 days,
church for three,
how we love Thee,

vital organs, focal
point of spirituality,
a forest of bristling
pipes, exotic names,
Lieblich, Gedeckt,
Clarabela, pipe
organist plays for
chorus a cappela,

Europe rocks
Tammy Faye's
punk metal son
spreading gospel
Jay Bakker ministry, 
tattoos, piercing God's Gay,

sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,

heavenly music maker,
4,000 pipes, four keyboards,
divine blend of technical
and spiritual Creator,

vital organs, focal
point of spirituality,
sex and the passionate
woman, God's gift
of orgasm blends song
of morality,

sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,

eros, spiritual ethos,
vital organs, complex,
church and sex,
different pipes make
different noise, blowers
force air into the organ,
turn on her pipes, hear
them hiss, two women
kiss,

sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,

It's the final Countdown...


Copyright 2006-2013 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist








   

 


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 Reviews of "Final Countdown: Vital Organs"
Reviewed by Barbara Terry
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
If only the person sitting next to you, actually knew what you were all about.

sex and church
sit in the pews
together, Holy
Heaven, it's the
Final Countdown,

This is so true Sage. Thank you for sharing. Happy New Year to you, and those whom you love.

May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
As always your crisp lines and strong adjectives race through your poetry stirring the senses and enticing the mind to ponder your thoughts and messages. Well done my friend.

Fee

Reviewed by Thomas Garrett
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
Sounds like you had an interesting New Year's Eve, Sage. May 2007 bring you the best of everything, friend.

Happy New Year, blessed be, take care,

Sonny G

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
Wow...quite interesting!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on January 1, 2007
in NY, there was a couple found having sex in the upper pews of a St. Francis Cathedral ... i forgot which one was counted as going down on the other ;)

great write, Sage ... potent message ...

have a happy ...


Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
Holy Heaven, it's the Final Countdown, and yes, something is definitely wrong with this picture...Does anyone else see this?
Sage~ you paint with words and the imagery , along with the music...sounds out beyond just understanding...
Who among us could cast that first stone?
Happy New Year Sage~
2007, bring it on!
Love and Peace~
kimmy~

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
I enjoyed this! I usually don't have the speakers on, but I did this time and wow! It really added impact!

Susan

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
well, what can I say..Excellent write...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on December 31, 2006
Sage, there is a cynism here that i really enjoyed(hope i spelled that right) anyway a really good write to start the new year


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