Creation of a Dime Novelist: Preachers See My Moccasin Eyelets (poem) by Sage Sweetwater on AuthorsDen

Creation of a Dime Novelist: Preachers See My Moccasin Eyelets
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Sage Sweetwater, unrivaled, bringing you the Upper Tier in lesbian erotica... silver inlaid zodiac skirts on your stirrups pour fire to your desire, saddled upon the wind, firebrand's breath slips under your black cape, passion brands your hot-scalding flesh, reins soaked in your hands, firebrand's sledgehammer blows against the metal, spike bar pries out a rail from the track, stop the train, get the Colt revolvers, disguised as preachers, preachers see my moccasin eyelets from the windows, brand me as an outlaw of God, wheels lock, grind and squeal, metal sparks explode, dancing in the air like witch's fireflies, creation of a dime novelist, flames glow from the firebox, branding the land with the Devil's coals, firebrand saves the Bibles, pulls them out with a grappling hook that dallies from the rope on your saddle horn, collection plate "railroad money" burned, strongboxes melted, preachers charred keys at the end of the line, with the second-ago selective memory, like the train leaping from the track, you leap from your saddle, we f**, slamming to earth, grinding deep trenches into the soil, screaming passion one of the boldest ambushes of religious lies we have been called upon to chronicle, no bodies, no twisted metal, no blood of Christ deceivers, telegraph repairman found only an empty whiskey bottle and your black cape hanging from a telegraph cross, they sniffed the pussy fire, the haunting sound of an organ played in the erotic air, the newspaper reported it as only the boldest lesbian tryst hot enough to stop a train, saddled upon the wind, firebrand's breath slips under your black cape... I... Copyright 2007 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist Evolving Our Vision... http://www.fileden.com/files/2007/8/10/1337791/gothicthunder.mid The Lavender Outlaw is in the House! The Firebrand Rocks! Sage Sweetwater's Authors Den poetry being transcribed to song by Iceland Songwriter Finnur Bjarki Sage Sweetwater Lesbian Songwriter Inducted into Porterhouse Music http://porterhouse.aiminghigh.is/?? THE BUCKSKIN SKIRT OAR TRAVELER* http://www.booksforchristians.com/bk_detail.asp?isbn=1420821601 FROM THE CONVENT TO THE RAWHIDE: THE SAGA OF SADIE CADE AND VI MONTANA http://www.booksforchristians.com/bk_detail.asp?isbn=1425926339 Sage Sweetwater Profile Page on Nextcat.com

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on September 24, 2007

Such imagery, such a storyteller, thankfully you seem to have an endless supply. Love it. Liz

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on September 23, 2007

This is some scorching tale, Sage. It reads like riding a horse at full gallop. Yeee-haw!!! Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

firebrand's breath lifts the black cape and reveals all ... with no deceptions ...

Reviewed by Nicky Goodman

Reviewed on September 22, 2007

one hell of a hot write...no slow burn either -this one is full on Scorchio Sage, from start to smoldering bush fire finish - earth wind and fire, melt of metal but the bibles are safe..interesting..loved the meteor trenches in the earth and the telegraph repairmen verse is a big smile, you tell a story so well - really liked this one - now i need to read again and pay more attention to the religious ideas which i am a bit thick with, and to the Devil - your tarot card posting had all the cards that always seem to appear in my occasional readings, lapse a few years and its still the same cards plus one or two 'new' that appear with their stories - anyway - another fantastic write, and the fiery passion in this one is well paced, but i'd watch out not to singe whiskers at the end there -surely the flames dont need too much fanning! tis a very sexy end verse tho'- 'hot enough to stop a train' - brilliant! Nickyxx

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Sage,

"... the newspaper reported
it only as the boldest lesbian
tryst hot enough to stop a train ...."

You got that right. Well done!!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Excellent write, Sage; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)