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It Took You
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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It took you to get
me to get to another
top title,

after years of healing,
I strapped myself in
the cherry picker and
asked the crane worker
to lift me up to the Nesters,

dwarfed by the sign,
the Indigo neon blinked
a cluster of stars, I
summoned the Starship
800 miles from the Las
Vegas Strip, rekindling
the past, Roswell, New
Mexico, July 8, 1947,

commanding general
of the Eighth Air Force
covered us up with a
weather balloon and
anthropomorphic
dummies.

ranch houses
were ransacked,
livestock wooden
floors pried loose,
and cold storage
fruit cellars were
emptied,

my terrestrial origin
hushed, I cried out
for my others, the
victims of the wreck
in/on the disc, and
when no sound echoed
back to my painful query,
or no alien corpses surfaced,
I journeyed to Badlands,
South Dakota,

I witnessed the
reintroduction of
the black-footed
ferret, the stories
rose from the vapors
of the charcoal campfires,

I scanned the enemy
from the top of the
Badland Walls,
after years of healing,
It took you to get
me to get to another
top title, I roped myself
and asked the Great
Sioux Spirits to lift me
up to the Nesters, I did
hear there were alien corpses
on the gurneys.


Copyright 10/28/2009 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist

 

 


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 Reviews of "It Took You"
Reviewed by Richard Orey
Reviewed on March 24, 2010
Amidst billions of stars and billions of galaxies, surely it must be true that we are the only life form, no?

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on December 14, 2009
Talk about a fertile imagination!! How is it that you always manage to surpass yourself, Sparkling Star-? "Broke the mold" leaps to mind!
A M A Z I N G !!!! Always, and Then, Pea

Reviewed on December 13, 2009
In my soul a seeker exists & with that
I would love to know this particular galactic truths…
Not from the perspective of cover ups &
Supposed unity of calm lies…(to avoid rampant fear & mayhem worldwide)
Who’s to say other existences of life are not reality?
Realms, light years…intelligence…awareness
We know air exists…radio waves…
Just because we can’t see it does not mean it is not present
I personally believe altering forms of communication exists
And we rise to this nest of awareness…repeatedly visited
Vickie

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on December 13, 2009
Held by every word. Great imagery! Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 4, 2009
In the moments of denial the commanders became liars for history's sake but we know. Yes! Sage! WE KNOW!!!
Love ans best wishes,
Susan

Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Sage, I am (contentedly) overwhelmed by the expanse of this poem; left with the sense of having had an out-of-body experience; observing history from a non-linear perspective.

~leslie

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
Mysteriously familiar, your narrator has taken me on a different kind of ride this time. From top to bottom, from realistic detail to surreal atmospheres, from life to death... such a roller coaster. Great writing and spirit.

Axilea

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
You have an incredible way with words...and an incredible way to tell a story...such beautiful work.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 30, 2009
A lovely, compelling, and meaningful poetice account, Sage. It's not your usual style but it's great. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Sage,
What a pleasure it is to read you again, and it's good you're back posting your beautiful work.
So much I admire in this poem, the use of 'you' intimate and personal and yet generic, the choice of words, the phrasing, the storyline itself and the cheer confidence in the writing.

John

Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Such a departure from your usual style, but then again, history comes alive in provocative, well penned lines - the images are startling. Well done, Sage.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Whatever "You" did was signficant, Sage, whether their intentions were good or ill - the result is magnificence anyways! Getting to the top seems to be very thematic in this poem, symbolic, and I love the juxtapose of the fact with the sci-fi - very surreal. A change of time and tempo for you, perhaps, as you take this measured over-view, but there is still spit-and-baccy in your rugged, journalistic style and intense attention to detail. I find your writes make us very rapt... and wrapped... consumed very much in the moment of what you're saying. This seems visionary. I somehow missed driving right through the centre of Roswell on my roadtrip earlier this year and lost my way on the Routes round it... still, it's strange light and flatness I found quite confusing and disorientating; there is a barrenness, like the clanking of a defunct wind/water tower in a desert, so all your keen cinematic imagery sketches in very vivid detail of all the seen and unseen forces at work. Love the way this pans in and out. Am feeling myself strangely sucked into this... The spirit of Roswell lingers, like those alien corpses on the gurneys (great word!). I adore how we don't need to know the whole storyline and plot to be mesmerised by your tales, Sage! Good to be reading your poetry again! xx

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
It's so good to read you again Sage, whatever gave you the jolt to write,I'm sure thankful. You are so special and we learn so much from you! Hope you hang out here for awhile!;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Great poem, Sage; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
Loved the story you conjured up in that very fertile mind of yous / No one does it like Sage / No one / Roswell? / Ah, I don't think so . . .

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 29, 2009
i love the revealing here-you are an amazing woman and an inspiration

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on October 28, 2009
Sage,
This is supremely written. I felt your energy in every word. It took you to get me to get to another...wow, some depth of perception and kismet moments staring into the abyss channeling such spirits to write this stellar poetry!
Those Sioux Spirits are working overtime, my dear.
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Eugene Williams
Reviewed on October 28, 2009
your mind wanders beyond the reaches of most it is a gift to see tomorrow while standing still in the shallow waters of today looking beyond is a gift very good observational poem


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