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Iris Out
by Sage Sweetwater → (All Poetry by Sage Sweetwater)
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Iris Out
 
Squeegee pulling
grasshopper juice
wiping the mind’s eye clean
 
 
 
~copyright 11/17/2009~
Ms. Sage Sweetwater,
firebrand lesbian novelist


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 Reviews of "Iris Out"
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on November 18, 2009
Hahaha!! Senryu Sage style. Gotta love it.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 18, 2009
Great Ku, and as I read I felt like I was sitting in a car at a traffic light as a homeless kid did my window...and yes that does put life and our own lifes in extreme perspective...
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Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
certainly puts things in perspective ...

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
"...grasshopper juice"?

I'll have to think about that one, Sage...

John

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
:)

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
A haiku that commands my complete attention, Sage. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
Oh but for the sake of life's windshield I would always be doing something with the juice.

Deep ...
Blessings and love,
Susan


Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on November 17, 2009
I'll take one please! My minds eye needs a little clearing. Love this ku Sage, very cleverly done...
Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed on November 17, 2009
Verrrry interesting, Sage; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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